A Cock Loving Slut

Good start!

Good start, more of the same

Hot and nasty

Hot and nasty, good wild stuff going on here. I like the sentence structure and the writing is good. Maybe a little more buildup and story development before they get to the nasty bits? Good descriptive and narrative. Maybe some tastes and smells to augment the experience....

Fantastic Beginning

This is a great start! I'd love to see what happens next, hopefully a little blackmail with all those photos. Lots of promise for public humiliation too, perhaps he can be taken out while dressed up like a slut and get a tattoo or maybe play some pool in dirty bar...

loving it

please please write and post the next parts soon! i want to read more as quickly as possible! thank you!!

nice job

You have so many options I can not wait until the next installment. Is it going to be blackmail, public humiliation or sharing this submissive tart with a friend? Anxiously awaiting what is next!!

Oh wow

Loved it. Absolutely fantastic and I can't wait to see what happens. Please continue. I will do whatever it takes for u to continue including dressing up like a schoolgirl for u.

HOTT!!

WOW!! What a story wish that was me!!

love of cock from susan

i really wish that the boy in the story was me as i am wearing white panties and petticoats as i am writing this

please give us part 2

can't wait for him to come back.

part 2 please

give me more of that liitle slut

great read, please get me chapter 2

cock tease.

what a cock tease part two plz

need more it great.

really great man need chapter 2.

Good start, now we need more.

WOW

I wish that were me being gaged and fucked like that.

Loved the story

Loved the first part of the story!! Can`t wait to read part 2. Wish that could`ve been me it was happening too!!

That is what I need

Thanks for giving me this clear vision of a perfect fantasy I always have had. I´m a slut too, I want to be treated so.

So hot! I wanna be a dirty slut.

I need the same

Well written and laid out story. Would trade places with Jake in a heartbeat. As a long time crossdressing dick sucking and fucking cum whore I was turned on by this story. If you are a fag cock lover until you have crossdressed and had a man treat you like the bitch slut you are you are missing one of the greatest experiences in your life. I dress and go to ABS locations for a night of fun. When you enter the Theater you get attention in a hurry. I love to stroll around the place attracting all of the attention I can. You immediately see cocks being jacked off while looking at you. To get further attention I select one that is setting in a location allowing access to my ass, drop on my knees and start sucking. I hike up the back of my skirt and so they can see my panties and the string of condoms hanging out of them. It usually does't take long for the ass fucking to begin. It quickly becomes a night of continuous fucking of my pussy and my sucking of cocks. getting 20+ is the norm, a good night I've frequently taken 35-40 and wanted more. I've been a cum whore for 25 years beginning at the age of 10. I've often wondered how many thousands of cocks I've taken over the years. For the last 15+ I've averaged 1200 or more per year, many times taking three at a time. Once in a while I'll dress and work the streets pacing back and forth, being the tramp, low life, cunt that I am. Those I generally fuck in an alley, doorway, bent over a car, or any other way that's conventient. For those I charge - $2.00 so I can know that I'm 'NOTHING BUT A LOW LIFE $2.00 WHORE!

i wanna be a cock loving slut 2 !!!

make me one

Too Quick !

Give him a little time to change.

Great story. Like all my fellow sissies I would also love to change places with Jake. It could only get better if Neil started force-feminizing Jake with hormones, that would be the ultimate fantasy.

so jealous!!

I wish I was Jake!!!!

nice

More please
and maybe the guy invites "Friends" to break her in

When he first put his dick in his mouth?

He bit it off. They had to call the ambulance, then the Police got involved. Guess who went to jail? (Hint - it wasn't Jake). Idiotic story.

Abrupt

The transition from "a guy who lives next to me" and "took a picture of me and said 'I knew you'd like it you little slut'" was non-existent. Even just a mention of "he glanced at my crotch, I think he might have been gay" or something to connect us to to the coming scene would have been something.

Otherwise it wasn't bad but the sudden lunge into "suddenly they started groping each other" was dumb. I say, keep writing and don't get in such a hurry.