All Comments on 'Warm Me Up'

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a very good story. You should write another chapter or two.

...very erotic and believable.

Definately more chapters needed, one very hot story along with some whipped cream, from one of your most recent admirers

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Great story, please continue with it. Thanks.

This is probably one of the best stories I have read on here. It was totally believable, and VERY well written and erotic. The part I liked the best was that you could almost put yourself in either of their places and feel exactly what they felt.

You definitely need to write more!!!

This story was TOP OF THE CLASS for sure!

Enjoyed every moment while reading your story. Please follow it up with more chapters.

thank you for a great story.

they were both found dead from carbon monoxide poisoning from running a generator indoors.

Well written but your research was lacking in the fact that the generator was on and running inside the house. Never but never run a generator inside of a building. Always make sure it is outside. Generators kill a lot of people like this every year. ....Jim

I really loved it and would like to read more,

They really need to experiment on how to make each other the supreme lover that they want to be with from now on. Maybe they could move in together, live as man and wife. The story has no limits to it, with the love that the author has brought out between them it could have a very good story behind their life together.Sweet loving sex with maybe a touch of each being jealous but then finding that their love is true and lasting. Thanks for the sweet read.

I was more interested in what they were doing to each other than I was some generator. I just assumed the generator was outside and the space heater was inside. Who cares anyhow? This is an erotic tale and a damned good one at that. You may never be an environmental engineer, but you are a really fine erotica writer. Please keep doing what you do so well.

What is unwritten, but clearly assumed here, is that the generator in question is a hydrogen powered fuel cell,which produces only water vapor as exhaust :-)

As with the other readers ,the mention of the power plant got my attention .I though we would have two bodies on our hands..Perhaps Her living in the country allowed them to plug the space heater into a current bush,which just happened to be growing outside her bedroom window,thus allowing them to remain ALIVE..YES I did ENJOY THIS READ ..TKS. 4 SHARING!

quite a good story i read theses just to keep my mind busy and i read extremely quickly although this story only lasted me 10 - 15 minutes it kept my attention :)

good work 5/5

Wonderful story of mother son love written with the emotions of a woman in mind....

You need to change the story and get the generator out of the house. The carbon monoxide exhaust from it would have killed them both! Hopefully no one will read your story and think it's okay to have generators indoors.

I loved your story and wish you would write more like it. Really hot!

That was so hot. I thought my heart would beat out of my chest with the intensity of your story telling.

It's obvious she wants to taste your cum, so next time you fuck her, why not pull out and cum in her mouth while you lick her pussy.

good job ! Waiting for some more mum son.

YOU SHOW LOTS OF PROMISE, KEEP WRITING THIS WAY YOU WILL BE A HIT. ONE PIECE OF ADVICE, DON'T START WHAT YOU CAN'T OR WON'T FINISH. BUT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I'LL WILL BE A FAN. BE LOOKING FOR YOU...........LAROC OF AGES.

It was such good story I read it again.

Like plenty of mothers and sons nowadays--more and more all the time--Kevin and his mother discover the perfect place for his stiff young cock and for all the creamy semen he's constantly building up in his hot young balls. It's the receptacle nature provides for a boy's big cock and his potent young sperm. It's called by many names, his mother's vagina, her mommy-hole, the hole her son came out of, his mother's twat, her coochie, her fuckhole, her minge, her cooze, her son's semen-catcher, her boy's prick's natural home--and boys love and adore it by all those names. But most of all a boy knows it and loves it by the simple name: his own mother's cunt.

great story. believable except for the faux pas of the gen in the room. 5 stars!!!

This was very good because there was no - we shouldn't, because we're mother and son.

What I like to do when I read a story like yours is to put myself in the story. I change the mother's name to my mother's name whenever it comes up. In this story Cindy became Laura and Kevin's name became mine. His and he became mine and me and so on.

This way, it felt like I was fucking my mother.

Good work.

Well done. There was nothing lewd about this- not the usual treating the other like a sex object. There was mutual respect and affection between them. The way you described how they tentatively explored each other- ready to stop at each point- how the whole thing came about, even- very realistic. Much more intriguing than the other wham-bams out there. Even when they are in a moment Kevin still acts like he is not just her lover, he's still her loving son and he treats his mother gently and respectfully. Thanks!

is well done.

it would be nice to know what happened next. but after this long . . . . . . . .

I loved it! Please write another chapter.

Well Done! Like sex happens so many times. It just kind of happens with unspoken agreement by both. Really hot. I think you may have ended this in the right place. As it is, it is the story of the beginning of a possible relationship. Their first time, that they had both longed for and fought themselves against. More chapters would just make this story complicated. Like incest isn't complicated enough already, right? Or even just plain vanilla sex between two people who are unrelated can really complicate their lives. So, I think right here is a good place to leave them and continue only in our own minds. Good story. Thanx

Nicely done ! One of your obvious fans stated that 'Hydrogen powered fuel cell ' was 'unwritten, but CLEARLY assumed ' , ( are you frickin' kidding me ? ) as the generator of choice . I'm not as clairvoyant when I'm reading a good sex story , as he was, I guess. I would have left that part out , and the house would 've been colder , and then jumped in bed with her as soon as I got there , and been busy warming the ol' girl much SOONER. But that's just me . I could be wrong . Nicely done !

That was a fantastic story, very well written. Thanks for sharing.

get rid of this cliched, hackneyed stuff , as if mom were easing the situation to let it happen

Lovely fuck and well told

A nice warm story, on a very cold night. Who gives a shit about the power being out. They found a way to keep warm and loved it. Thanks for the read.

Really good... love stories like that.

Nice job. well written and convincing.

With a generator in the room they would both be very dead by morning. Stupid mistake.

This story was written from a third person’s view. Does the author want us to be voyeurs and watch? I think male readers will be the son and the female readers will quietly be the mother.

Better than 80% of the mom/son stories I find here.

Passionate....Not perfect but arousing to read.

4 stars

Exciting when you discover a family member is as sexually perverted as YOU are.

Well done, reminds me of old times. Well written, let us have more