All Comments on 'Tommy's Neighbourhood Ch. 01'

For a first time story it's wonderful, what a lucky boy please carry on writing.

Great story with a nice well paced build up. I really liked that you did not rush the ending.

Why so little of the actual fucking, hope makes her preggers and screws her everyday, but please do not shy away from the actual deed. It is the reason we read them, so keep it coming.

Let the adventures of Tommy keep coming.

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A great first time,but you need an editor to smooth out the few rough spots.Still it is worth 5 stars and keep on writing.

This is an excellent fist attempt at writing for Literotica. I hope to read many more chapters in Tommy's continuing adventures.

Dude, you have to keep this going! It's fucking great!

damn , what a HOT story we have here ; please go on , really like your writing ; bring on part 2 and include more facials

please keep on with this series , would love to read part 2 soon

A first boner at 18, really?

MMMMMM this is a great read, well thought out and paced, the only thing that makes me laugh is the age of the "boys" and how mummy would not like him to be out after dark, come on unless USA and Australia have a new species of kids ............. in the UK it is a problem that you find 13 year old kids out all times of the days and nights, not good by all means but a reality of to day.

I'm sure all boys of 18 have had time out on their own at night, most with a girl of lower age.

Great writing keep it up

I don't claim to be any kind of medical buff in any way and in fact my research lacked in the area of Tommy's condition as it was the whole premise of the story. Yes, Tommy developed really late, if the suspension of disbelief is a little difficult then I apologise.

As for his overprotective mother, it's a symptom of his delayed growth, intellectual mind (when compared to a lot of teens, but not overly unusual) and sedentary lifestyle. You'll find this changes through the story as he experiences more of the world.

This story is choc full of win! Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

I know the story was told from view of a nerdy shy teen

However, why did the author have the woman actions that of a virgin girl on one of her few dates

Author strikes me as a young pimple faced with a wild imagination

I loved the first chapter to you series. Few grammer & spelling mistakes but nothing that took away from your story. Keep up the good work!

it seems he is also very emotionally and socially behind the norm.

Great story and you put the sex in the first chapter where it belonged. Keep writing the good words.

to be Vikki aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh

Soo funny and sexy, great.

Small boy with big cock meets nymphomaniac older woman with huge tits.

FFS. And morons are lapping it up even though there were glaring errors like her underwear going from pink to black.

A story for knuckle scrapers.