I've never commented before on a story, but especially the first part really touched me, having been hurt as well. I hope to find so great a partner as in this story some day!
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Anonymous12/11/09
thank you
after ones core is beckoned to tears the allure of fearlessness and all its vastness is so very tangible.
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Anonymous12/13/09
Great job of telling this story!
Loved it, and look forward to more from this author.
English
moving
I've never commented before on a story, but especially the first part really touched me, having been hurt as well. I hope to find so great a partner as in this story some day!
thank you
after ones core is beckoned to tears the allure of fearlessness and all its vastness is so very tangible.
Great job of telling this story!
Loved it, and look forward to more from this author.
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