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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/09/09

Overkill!

Take out about half the bullshi* bogging your story down and you still have plenty left to inform AND inflame.Remember, left is often MORE!

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by Anonymous12/09/09

Dolly Birds

I liked your first story but this one was bland and not sexy, I prefer more earthy lesbian tales,so it didn`t do it for me,might appeal to teenage lesbians.Why not write about voluptous mature women lesbians over fifty,now that would be a REAL TURN ON.

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by techygurl12/26/09

Interesting and believable

I agree that it could use more sex, but the backstory had interesting details, and the little snot got her comeuppance.

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