Begging For It

great work

I thought it was excellent and i couldnt stop reading it.It was well written and very exciting!!!.My partner thanks you also.I look forward to more of your works.

Unexpected...

Normally and usually I'm very selective reading stories under this category as some authors tend not to have their heroines retaliate back. The moment the cocks entered the pussies the heroines tend to succumb immediately and even fell right in love with their abuser.

At first I was very reluctant to read this story cos' I was afraid it might tarnished my good expectation of you as a skilled writer (I read your Last Of The Unicorn, Touch of Wof and Of Gods and Vampires, which I fell in love with tremendously.)

Anyway, I took a deep breath and plunged in and well, I was delighted that it was good just like your other stories. It wasn't sleazy or gory at all. (You get the gist about sleaze... the forever non ending long exclaimation. It was a pain to read.)

Interestingly yours was very nicely written and very adult feel even though both were in high school.

All in all I do enjoy this story. ;)

hope there's a follow up

This story is by far the best I've read in this category. I normally find it hard to find any that don’t disappoint me, but this was an excellent submission! I hope there’s a follow up to this! Perhaps move it into a bit more of relationship or just them in the locker room ;)

Great!

Absolutely loved this story! Got me so wet! I wish a guy would tie me up and make me his bitch!

more!!!

i loved this, i wish you would continue this story

Nice!

I wish this guy would make me his little whore! You did a great job!

Loved it!

This was a great story I wish you would continue it! I can only hope!

Comtinue

You have to continue this story, it has so much potential.

That was so hot! I really hope you continue this!

Continuation?

I can see this story expanding into a few chapters. You might want to think about it

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fisting my cock

Same old story...

Its the same old story with a different pinch of salt. Rape a girl and she likes the act. Bullshit. But I do appreciate the presentation made by you. It would have been better if a little presentation been made on the side of the girl.

more please

Wow

While reading the story my heart was beating fast, my pussy was dripping and I wanted that big long cock to be inside of me.

More!

I want to know what happens the next day! I've read this story a few times now and it's as good every time as it was the first. But I want mooooorrre!

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Booga