All Comments on 'Holiday Employment Opportunity'

by YoursSINSerely

Sort by:
  • 13 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You're Drinking Too Much

Hunni, I think you are drinking too much lately, but it was a cute story. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good luck

in the contest but it really wasn't very written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Santa Claus

I do like Santa Claus stories.

BarbieBunnyBarbieBunnyover 14 years ago
I liked it

This was a very nice, family friendly story. I liked it.

DG HearDG Hearover 14 years ago
Cute one Sin!

I enjoyed it, made me smile. Short but still sweet. A very Merry Christmas to you and best of luck in the contest.

With respect

DG Hear

SimonCowellSimonCowellover 14 years ago
Ho, ho, ho

Ho, ho, ho, Merry Christmas. A light but enjoyable story.

Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Santa

Great story but you could have left out the drinking on the job. There are plenty of us who wear the red suit who don't need alcohol to be jolly we're just naturally that way!

CarBuffStuffCarBuffStuffover 14 years ago
Cute

Cute little story this. It was just enough to pique my interest. I think I may know the guy in the story. He's sounds familiar.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
Cute

This was a cute story, although I couldn't help wondering why they didn't do their fondling and getting it on after work. Did you mean "Bauble?"

jacks4ujacks4uover 14 years ago
Nice!

Babs,<p>

<p>

What an enjoyable story! Erotic and arousing, yet not smutty or pornographic! Thanks for sharing it with us!<p>

Best of luck in the contest, and happy holidays,<p><p>

Jacks

driphoneydriphoneyover 14 years ago
Sweet

Babs, you sell yourself short. It's a great little tale, and it's great to see a story showing that love and sex isn't just for the young. :)

shoeslayershoeslayerover 14 years ago
Liked it alot

Merry Christmass Mrs.Claus!

I liked it alot sweet and cheery. I like how they met

and that they were very happy together.

Had i written this They would have gotten quite happy with the "eggnog an rum" thing, felt each other up under the mistletoe, h'ed give'er a nice size tubesteak wrapped nicely that he took from the sleigh and they would "get it on right up to the "New Year" But that is a shoeslayer 4 ya

your version is better.

Shoeslayer

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Sequel needed here

When you get your mojo back you ought to consider telling us what these two got up to in the New Year and beyond.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous