Great build up of the characters and plot. But then, in a blink of an eye, it was over...
A good read. The descriptions were very well thought out, as were the emotions she ran through. A little too quick to the sex part but certainly a woman's view.
Enjoyable, really appreciate the lady's perspective. Take some more time with the steamy bits and it could be very memorable.
She's usually really good with the kinky stuff. Check out her other work.
She is right, she's not ready for marriage, thanks.
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Great lead in and then...
Great build up of the characters and plot. But then, in a blink of an eye, it was over...
Well done!
A good read. The descriptions were very well thought out, as were the emotions she ran through. A little too quick to the sex part but certainly a woman's view.
Nice one
Enjoyable, really appreciate the lady's perspective. Take some more time with the steamy bits and it could be very memorable.
hmmm
She's usually really good with the kinky stuff. Check out her other work.
Good Story
She is right, she's not ready for marriage, thanks.
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