All Comments on 'Our Secret World Ch. 02'

Very nicely written, incl. use of language. So much hotter, I thought, than previous story. Sufficient as is, I suppose, but I sure can imagine an ongoing voyeuristic adventure. One path could someday have Tirzah say to Arella, "I so love you both, I would be pleased to help you pleasure your loving husband." Another path would have you trying to convince

Arella to allow the two of you to be photographed, with her protesting that there's no one to take the pictures. "What about Tirzah," you say. Then again, maybe just looking indefinitely.