by MugsyB
Nice job, Mugsy. :) Fun story, and I like how Hilary was defensive but had a soft spot (for a defenseman, how appropriate :) ). Come on, I want the next one.
Till then the best to hope for would be an ice hockey subcategory.
I got my story - and it's awesome! Thank you so much and keep up the great work, both of you.
I know you already do. They don't even have the balls to post nasty comments under their user name, they have to post anonymously. Simply tells me the person is jealous of such great talent. My advice to them: Move on. There are plenty of other stories on Lit that you can pollute with your hatred. As for this story, I will admit, I didn't like it as much as your others, but it was still very good and very well written. What? Did I hear you say you're doing a Red Wings story soon? COOL! :)
You just never stop amazing me! I love your stories! And between you and PennLady... I'm just giddy with excitement over the next possible story!!!
I think you could do a story on 'Brody'* I would have to say that he's my favorite Caps player! Well, if he's who I think he is!! HAHA!
I dont like hockey, i dont watch hockey and i've never seen a game but I have to tell you I LOVE, LOVE your stories and I cant wait to read more.
I kind of wish it had been in chapters so that I could wallow in it a bit longer. It went by way too quickly. It was good though. lol, feel free to send me a virtual smack. 6 pages is nothing to sneeze at, I know. I was just engrossed and it was over before I knew it. I like getting to know all the team members. Keep up the good work! Thanks for writing.
i heard on the radio this morning that "Mark Gaines" was hurt in a game the other night and my first thought was Hilary could help nurse him back to health! I hope you continue this story and your others in the hockey series!
Since reading your Caps stories, I've become a Caps fan over the past few months. After learning a bit more about some of the players, I started reading this story over again, and I think you did a great job with the personality of MG.... or at least what would seem to fit. From what I have seen of him, I can picture him doing and saying so many of the things you mention in here. And I also love the personality of "Brody." Hilarious. Although I'm not sure about the Obie character.... the more I learn about him, the more I doubt he'd ever seriously date an American girl.... but that's the great part about fiction, I guess.... you can make it be whatever you want it to be!
so im stupid and while dragging my mouse across the page accidentally voted 2 stars. not sure if you get to see votes individually but if you do, know that if i could intentionally vote, it would be a 5. and if it would let me vote again thats what i would do. great story :D
10. Back on the Ice (MG and Hilary):
http://www.literotica.com/s/back-on-the-ice
Really long, but worth it. Was held captive till the very end. Thanks for something that was both romantic and steamy. :) Amazing work. Keep it up :)
I read like a romance novella. In that regard, it was too long. It was also typical of your other stories. Nicely written, but what is this thing about hockey?
It was a cute story. I liked it. I have no idea why there were a couple of hateful comments below me, especially since this story does not deserve it so I thought I'd leave you a nice one.
Great work.its a lovely romantic story.i enjoyed reading.good work.thx
It helps if you're an NHL hockey fan but this is a nifty story of a lady who can't quite believe that a top-notch hockey star would want a relationship with her.
Well worth the read,and a follow-up chapter,further exploring their relationship would be nice. (It could also have the 3rd girl,Jane,pick up with teammate Ivan Sqeezeatitsky.)
A BIG 5 for this fun story!
Love it and love them! I've always liked to see hockey players shirtless, in locker rooms, displaying a bit of sexy chest hair. That's how I imagine Mark Gaines -- shirtless, with a swath of dark chest hair for his great chest, even spilling down his abs! Keep them together, please!
Nice story. I thought she was a tad quick to jump in the sack with him given her prior history with men. Otherwise very believable.