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Formal Event

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/07/10

MORE!!!

I've read most of your stories and I have to say this one needs a sequel!! I love your stories and trust me my hubby loves for me to read them cuz I'm so ready when I'm done with the stories

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by Anonymous01/08/12

Thanks!

Enjoyed a bunch of your stories.
Nice closing image in Formal Event..probably should have stopped before the last phrase though.
I'd like to know a bit more about your heroine...more depth/character.
Better than i can do for sure..appreciated.

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by Tavadelphin06/13/12

well done -

Great imagery and well executed tension and suspense - thanks -

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by Anonymous07/13/12

Awesome work

Excellent story as always, you are the must read author for me.

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by btexpress01/02/14

love all your stories...well written...thanks

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by Anonymous03/27/15

I am reading my way through your stories and have enjoyed them all they are all truly erotic and help an old man dream I dislike the thought of incest so avoid those stories everyone to their own I suppose

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by Anonymous05/18/15

She wasn't a likable character.

Too much like science fiction, for me. Others might like it.

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by oldtwit05/09/17

MMMMMM very good

I loved this part good sex and part a little different,
I feel you could have left this just a bit more open ended so you could follow up on this with some more adventures of her , well thought out from here and nicely written.

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by Anonymous05/29/17

Fantasy?

A story that genuinely has style, as well as sex, and that I really appreciate.
Intriguing story told without taking pages and pages; also very much applauded.
To be ultra-picky, it's a pity about the occasional typos and spelling errors.
Thoroughly enjoyable.

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by lwilton02/10/18

Very Very nice

A very nice fantasy yarn, exquisitely crafted. The bow tie at the end was unexpected and a very nice touch. It obviously leaves all manner of questions in the reader's mind, as any good fairy tale should. Did it happen? Will she see him again? If so, under what circumstances? Does the dress only work once? Is the store with the little old lady still there? Will a blond Prince Charming appear at the next affair instead of the Dark Prince here? Will she become a party girl? :-)

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