I think its brave of you to explore the notion of death and and "comfort sex" for lack of a better term. It was very well set up and done with the prose not only offering a window into the sex, but also into your state of mind at the time.
That's what this vignette is...an event! It has all the elements of great drama, most especially the powerful emotions slamming into us, pulling us into that sex-soaked room, into those hurting hearts, into that new dynamic in their relationship! Nicely done!
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Very interesting...
I think its brave of you to explore the notion of death and and "comfort sex" for lack of a better term. It was very well set up and done with the prose not only offering a window into the sex, but also into your state of mind at the time.
I'm in awe
of the language, the tone, the dark beauty of this piece.
Wow!
It turned me on...enough said.
My word, what an event!
That's what this vignette is...an event! It has all the elements of great drama, most especially the powerful emotions slamming into us, pulling us into that sex-soaked room, into those hurting hearts, into that new dynamic in their relationship! Nicely done!
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