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by UnderYourSpell12/11/09

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Very clever piece especially about the magpies. Tip your cap 'Good morrow mister magpie'. It's a parliament of owls though and a murder of crows. Thanks for a good read

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by sir_goodhead12/17/09

Curiosity compels

that I ask the significance of your title. A "parliament of owls" is correct, but I see no outright relation in that respect.








* I do not use the thermometer*

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by normal jean04/08/10

WOW!!

what a terrific story. I enjoyed every line.It did not ramble, it was clear. concise and understandable and VERY visual m( which I love in a poem or prose). I loved the reference to the old witch country. Well done, :)

NJ

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