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by Anonymous

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by butters12/09/09

reviewed in today's new poems

just to let you know your poems have been reviewed today over on Lit's poetry forum. Please visit this link to read what's been said about your pieces:

http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.ph p?p=32697289&postcount=2894


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by avrgblkgrl05/15/10

Nice

I liked this because it was so simple and uncluttered. It captures a very erotic moment~watching ur lover sleep naked, bare, honest, the way only you know them. I like that they did not have sex.

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by Hyades02/19/11

So true.

What you related here is so true. The love comes through the eyes of those beholding the woman sleeping. The marks left by clothing will disappear but not the love of two people. That in itself is erotic.

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