how would jimmy feel if his wife was pulling trains? how would she feel if gary was taking part in a gangbang? how would she feel if she brought home an incurable std? or if gary found out and, rightfully, divorced her? how would she feel if gary lost his job because he blew off a client? too many questions...and the answer is?? Wrong.
....realize you haven't pissed anyone off for a week so you post this?
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Anonymous12/11/09
Grear Job
Great job Bob! Every woman has an inner whore, and any man who doesn't realize that is either a fool or blind. This little honey could only keep her beastly little demond at bay for so long before it had to be released. I mean she tried and did a good job of it, but if you neglect any woman for to long the inner whore will win out, and this little whore won big time. I'm sure it won't be put down easily either, but for every Chimera there is a Bellerophon.
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Anonymous12/11/09
To the person below.
Your correct she IS a whore and should really tell everyone she knows what a WHORE she is. Certainly her husband should know so that he can get tested and divorce the whore. Then take the kids away from her and then take her back to Jimmy and let him have the bitch FULL time. Where is the REAL Just plain Bob? could he step forward so we can what to expect. Talk about a split personality. Sorry Bob, whichever one you are today, but this is just tyoru slut and whore writer side coming out. Put him away. He's no good for you.
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Anonymous12/11/09
What
Is the oppisite of erotic?
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Anonymous12/11/09
Disappointed
JPB - I check out your page almost everyday looking for new stories, and for the most part, find them enjoyable or at least interesting. Unfortunately, for me, this wasn't one of them. It may have been a little better if she would have suffered consequences for her actions. She is a slut with no respect for her husband or her family. Too bad he didn't get a video of the event to support throwing her out. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Tim
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Anonymous12/11/09
Very believeable
This story does deal with the fact that whats inside us on occation when given the right oppertunity takes over and releases its inner self. Having been in a long term relationship I can say that what she went through is believeable and the plot justify's her actions because her hubby let her down when she was all hot and horny. Weve all been there and should leave the rude comments alone and congradulate the author on the well written story that for some reason has brought memories back to my wife that I love and adore and the times when she made some poor decisions, but got the fucking of her life in the process.
Another JPB story that leaves us hanging. What is the moral of the story?? I just don't get it. Think we need a slut/cuckold category for these type of stories.
its OK to cheat on your spouse when they piss you off. So when he finally finds out and is pissed off, kicks her out the house so she can be all the slut she can want to be, he can feel free to keep the kids and find himself a woman who is not stupid as her. I must admitt I often admire your lack of endings, but this one is not in that ballpark. But worse, you have not used your skill to fairly develop the husband - if you did he would become a human being and sympathetic and that would give her even less an excuse to do what she did. Her rationalzatins at the end and her selfishness rightly elicited the negative criticism here. This must be one of those stories that you talked about a couple months ago that belonged with the group where the wife gets away with it.
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Anonymous12/11/09
Another sick story
writen by a brainless moron with the moral values of an alley cat. Come on Bob you can do better than this.
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Anonymous12/11/09
why the hell do you
try a genre your just not able to write? the making of a slut was already real bad and here again your not able to create an erotic taste to such a story. you would really have to learn from others. this is shit. I like your writing but thats not what you are able to do.
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Anonymous12/11/09
What in the hell is this female doing married?
Her lifestyle before she married and now after she is married is not fit to be a wife or mother. She should be in a whorehouse doing what she does best. What a waste of a story. You should have had the husband tell her to move out he has all the evidence he needs for a divorce based on adultry and being a whore.
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Anonymous12/11/09
Anony in USA I feel very sorry for you and
for you being married to a woman such as yours. If you like being a cuck good for you but dont make out this story is anything near good.
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Anonymous12/11/09
Why the fuck should this story
piss you all off boys? It's just about some slut that likes dick and her daft hubbie who probably looks like fatpudgypete. There are thousands of chicks out there putting it out, a huge percentage of them married to some beer sucking retard. I love these horny sluts. What's not to love? Good story Bob. Listen you all clustergimps with your hypocritical high morality, you are on the wrong side. About 3% of wives are faithful. For example my wife is devoted to me and she knows she always better be, and always is, faithful. But I don't want your wife to be faithful dude, cos I want to fuck it, and may already have. But you see the point don't you? I've got no hang up about loving slut stories. I fucking love 'em. They ain't my girl getting her cunt drilled. So they must be yours.
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Anonymous12/12/09
OMG, you have to place JPB in his own f-world...
Why are the masses surprised? These fucked up skank slut wife and ball-less male characters are the trademark of this fucked up author. However, 98.1 of JPB's stories are fucked up, the 1.9% that are revenge or decent stories are actually pretty good. Keep it in perspective - this particular story is a trademark version of JPB's typical dog shit stories.
....you have an amazing ability to entrap female readers even when you write a story(such as this) which should foment hatred of women.Look at the comment below,from the woman who can't spell.She herself spreads contemptible fallacy,"ALL women have an inner slut." (she never met my mother)and "you neglect any women for to(o)long" etc.(Yeah that sucks when that horrible neglect called BRINGING HOME THE BACON gets in the way.If I were a woman you would not be my favorite author!Hee Hee!
....Based on what you write it's not too hard to imagine the picture you and your wife make.Yeah I have to agree with you.I'm 100% sure she IS faithful.Now choke on your budweiser pussy. (Sorry Bob,I'm bored today)
read any of this author's stories because I find them contrived and mostly without merit. I also think that anyone with enough time to either write or steal others stories must be in a wheelchair. Somehow, I found myself reading this story without noticing who "wrote" it. The most enjoyable part was reading the comments. I really liked the one from the "anonymous" guy who loves slut wives because his woman wouldn'tnever do that and he wants to tap the ones that do. Well, "buddy", here is one wife that would NOT do you because she would be laughing so hard when she saw your "Bark Park frank" looking like it already had a bite taken out of it. I f...ing dare you to send me feedback with an actual e mail address. . . yea, that is what I thought.
As with all of the author's stories, this is well written. A fast moving story, and it could be said that it is a good short story.Thanks for the post, I enjoyed reading the work.
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Anonymous12/16/09
Not only was it not "very realistic",
but it was crap. A story about a whore who gets away with treating her husband like shit. This was supposed to erotic, or satisfying in some manner? It wasn't.
Hate on human nature not the author ! The story is very well written & largely credible. That's all that counts to me . If you are such decent guys -wtf are you doing reading stories on a porn site instead of perusing Reader's Digest? That's a rhetorical question because I know you have no answer outside of - trying to have your cake & eat it too.
The old hubby working to much line. Well how about he says No I will not do that. Understanding boss says fine go home. The client has a crappy time and moves the contract. With the loss of business the down size the hubby job and he is out of work. Mean boss just fires him and he is out. Now he is a loser she can't respect and will have sex with Real Men. Some net sum is still the same: she is a self centered gutter slut that should never be allowed in your house.
In reality she is going the be a slut nothing that the husband does will change it.
I have seen women cheat on their husbands out of spite and way out of proportion to wrong they felt their husband had done them. Sick bitches. Stay away from the mentally ill ones.
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Anonymous10/13/14
She shouldn't have worried
Jimmy videoed the whole thing and sent it to Gary. Gary threw her out and filed for divorce so she was free to fuck Jimmy, et. al. Perfect way for a cheating slut to use her anger to lose her husband, her kids, her family and friends.
English
wrong wrong wrong wrong!
how would jimmy feel if his wife was pulling trains? how would she feel if gary was taking part in a gangbang? how would she feel if she brought home an incurable std? or if gary found out and, rightfully, divorced her? how would she feel if gary lost his job because he blew off a client? too many questions...and the answer is?? Wrong.
Jesus Bob
Nice sick story, no thanks.
What, you wake up wednesday and....
....realize you haven't pissed anyone off for a week so you post this?
Grear Job
Great job Bob! Every woman has an inner whore, and any man who doesn't realize that is either a fool or blind. This little honey could only keep her beastly little demond at bay for so long before it had to be released. I mean she tried and did a good job of it, but if you neglect any woman for to long the inner whore will win out, and this little whore won big time. I'm sure it won't be put down easily either, but for every Chimera there is a Bellerophon.
To the person below.
Your correct she IS a whore and should really tell everyone she knows what a WHORE she is. Certainly her husband should know so that he can get tested and divorce the whore. Then take the kids away from her and then take her back to Jimmy and let him have the bitch FULL time. Where is the REAL Just plain Bob? could he step forward so we can what to expect. Talk about a split personality. Sorry Bob, whichever one you are today, but this is just tyoru slut and whore writer side coming out. Put him away. He's no good for you.
What
Is the oppisite of erotic?
Disappointed
JPB - I check out your page almost everyday looking for new stories, and for the most part, find them enjoyable or at least interesting. Unfortunately, for me, this wasn't one of them. It may have been a little better if she would have suffered consequences for her actions. She is a slut with no respect for her husband or her family. Too bad he didn't get a video of the event to support throwing her out. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Tim
Very believeable
This story does deal with the fact that whats inside us on occation when given the right oppertunity takes over and releases its inner self. Having been in a long term relationship I can say that what she went through is believeable and the plot justify's her actions because her hubby let her down when she was all hot and horny. Weve all been there and should leave the rude comments alone and congradulate the author on the well written story that for some reason has brought memories back to my wife that I love and adore and the times when she made some poor decisions, but got the fucking of her life in the process.
Another JPD with no conclusion
Another JPB story that leaves us hanging. What is the moral of the story?? I just don't get it. Think we need a slut/cuckold category for these type of stories.
So the moral of this story is
its OK to cheat on your spouse when they piss you off. So when he finally finds out and is pissed off, kicks her out the house so she can be all the slut she can want to be, he can feel free to keep the kids and find himself a woman who is not stupid as her. I must admitt I often admire your lack of endings, but this one is not in that ballpark. But worse, you have not used your skill to fairly develop the husband - if you did he would become a human being and sympathetic and that would give her even less an excuse to do what she did. Her rationalzatins at the end and her selfishness rightly elicited the negative criticism here. This must be one of those stories that you talked about a couple months ago that belonged with the group where the wife gets away with it.
Another sick story
writen by a brainless moron with the moral values of an alley cat. Come on Bob you can do better than this.
why the hell do you
try a genre your just not able to write? the making of a slut was already real bad and here again your not able to create an erotic taste to such a story. you would really have to learn from others. this is shit. I like your writing but thats not what you are able to do.
What in the hell is this female doing married?
Her lifestyle before she married and now after she is married is not fit to be a wife or mother. She should be in a whorehouse doing what she does best. What a waste of a story. You should have had the husband tell her to move out he has all the evidence he needs for a divorce based on adultry and being a whore.
Anony in USA I feel very sorry for you and
for you being married to a woman such as yours. If you like being a cuck good for you but dont make out this story is anything near good.
Why the fuck should this story
piss you all off boys? It's just about some slut that likes dick and her daft hubbie who probably looks like fatpudgypete. There are thousands of chicks out there putting it out, a huge percentage of them married to some beer sucking retard. I love these horny sluts. What's not to love? Good story Bob. Listen you all clustergimps with your hypocritical high morality, you are on the wrong side. About 3% of wives are faithful. For example my wife is devoted to me and she knows she always better be, and always is, faithful. But I don't want your wife to be faithful dude, cos I want to fuck it, and may already have. But you see the point don't you? I've got no hang up about loving slut stories. I fucking love 'em. They ain't my girl getting her cunt drilled. So they must be yours.
OMG, you have to place JPB in his own f-world...
Why are the masses surprised? These fucked up skank slut wife and ball-less male characters are the trademark of this fucked up author. However, 98.1 of JPB's stories are fucked up, the 1.9% that are revenge or decent stories are actually pretty good. Keep it in perspective - this particular story is a trademark version of JPB's typical dog shit stories.
Have to add jpb that....
....you have an amazing ability to entrap female readers even when you write a story(such as this) which should foment hatred of women.Look at the comment below,from the woman who can't spell.She herself spreads contemptible fallacy,"ALL women have an inner slut." (she never met my mother)and "you neglect any women for to(o)long" etc.(Yeah that sucks when that horrible neglect called BRINGING HOME THE BACON gets in the way.If I were a woman you would not be my favorite author!Hee Hee!
Re: why the fuck"
....Based on what you write it's not too hard to imagine the picture you and your wife make.Yeah I have to agree with you.I'm 100% sure she IS faithful.Now choke on your budweiser pussy. (Sorry Bob,I'm bored today)
I usually don't
read any of this author's stories because I find them contrived and mostly without merit. I also think that anyone with enough time to either write or steal others stories must be in a wheelchair. Somehow, I found myself reading this story without noticing who "wrote" it. The most enjoyable part was reading the comments. I really liked the one from the "anonymous" guy who loves slut wives because his woman wouldn'tnever do that and he wants to tap the ones that do. Well, "buddy", here is one wife that would NOT do you because she would be laughing so hard when she saw your "Bark Park frank" looking like it already had a bite taken out of it. I f...ing dare you to send me feedback with an actual e mail address. . . yea, that is what I thought.
Very realistic storyline
As with all of the author's stories, this is well written. A fast moving story, and it could be said that it is a good short story.Thanks for the post, I enjoyed reading the work.
Not only was it not "very realistic",
but it was crap. A story about a whore who gets away with treating her husband like shit. This was supposed to erotic, or satisfying in some manner? It wasn't.
Too trashy
so I gave it a 1
DWornock,,,,
You nailed it on this one.
@ negative commentators of this story
Hate on human nature not the author ! The story is very well written & largely credible. That's all that counts to me . If you are such decent guys -wtf are you doing reading stories on a porn site instead of perusing Reader's Digest? That's a rhetorical question because I know you have no answer outside of - trying to have your cake & eat it too.
So let'ts see
The old hubby working to much line. Well how about he says No I will not do that. Understanding boss says fine go home. The client has a crappy time and moves the contract. With the loss of business the down size the hubby job and he is out of work. Mean boss just fires him and he is out. Now he is a loser she can't respect and will have sex with Real Men. Some net sum is still the same: she is a self centered gutter slut that should never be allowed in your house.
In reality she is going the be a slut nothing that the husband does will change it.
Funny thing
I have seen women cheat on their husbands out of spite and way out of proportion to wrong they felt their husband had done them. Sick bitches. Stay away from the mentally ill ones.
She shouldn't have worried
Jimmy videoed the whole thing and sent it to Gary. Gary threw her out and filed for divorce so she was free to fuck Jimmy, et. al. Perfect way for a cheating slut to use her anger to lose her husband, her kids, her family and friends.
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