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vrosej10over 14 years ago~
Good show! A pantoum can be a slippery beasty to nail as I recently discovered. I like it.
EroticOrogenyover 14 years agoI like it
I find it more erotic than 'Someday my Prince will come'
Brings back memories of times with her on the rug, under the tree. Good Pantoum.
lorencinoover 14 years agoSplendido
You pulled off a lovely, lascivious piece here, fluff and all, in spite of the constraints of the form.
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