Your story was so erotic it made me hard reading it and I am in my 50's
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Anonymous12/12/09
Nicely done
Hot and erotic! If this is your first story, you could have fooled me. Well written and original. Looking forward to read some more. Don't make us wait. Thanks. ML
This was a great story. As for the comment about not liking cheating stories, get over your moral self and realize that you are on an erotic story site. Does your wife know that you are on here reading stories?
I liked the story and I think it was a believable accident that lead them to having sex as for the comment about monster tits I don't think 36D's are monsters.
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Anonymous12/12/09
wow great story !!
plz more of your stories.
it was sooo hot.. !!! :D
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Anonymous12/12/09
Is there any doubt ?
Of course he will go to his sisters party ; are we going to hear all about it ? maybe he wants to taste her !!!
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Anonymous12/12/09
Looking forward to 2nd party!!!!
It was a very erotic story, it was well bilt to the climax. it also had a good ëxcuse" for the sex part. most stories are to easy turning in to sex, there should be some resistance.
That was just a fine little incest tale. It would be nice to see them continue their incestuous couplings, accidentally or otherwise. Thanks for great submission!.
Of course he's gonna go to the costume party! I loved this story and look forward to reading the next one. I noticed they didn't use a condom... accidents happen! ;)
I loved it! It was nice to read something different!
So kudos to you on some interesting originality.
I look forward to more original story lines from you!
Thanks for writing!
sexmate
Loved it, let's hear about the 2nd. costume party! Maybe his wife needs to be the back half of the costume for a little while?
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Anonymous02/27/10
Loved it!
Seriously my favorite tale on here right now! Looking forward to the next costume party!
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Anonymous03/18/10
I like your story
I like it especially the part of under the costume was a smell of pussy. I always like sniffing dirty panties and how a pussy smells. Wish you could include in your story about incest panty sniffing.
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Anonymous04/11/10
Liked it
Well written, and very hot. I look forward to more of your work. =)
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Anonymous04/11/10
Hot and original
Nicely done author. Now on to part two, okay? Pretty please. ML
The creative details that flowed along with the slowly building heat and electric excitement of eroticism left me extremely satisfied with the story's climax. The final paragraph left me happy. You left me wishing I'd grown up with sister such the one in your story. If I was a smoker, I'd have a cigarette now. Thank you.
I've never commented on a story before but felt I just had to encourage you to write more. If this is truly your first published erotic lit then you are off to a fantastic start. Please keep writing!
This by far the best spontaneous incest story in this place. Excellent job.
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Anonymous11/23/11
There was no question that part of me wanted to go... but would I?
obviously a rhetorical question lol
they'll fuck like rabbits and she'll get knocked up
sounds yummy to me
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Anonymous11/25/11
Write another chapter!
Such a hot story deserves a hot sequel!
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Anonymous12/11/11
This was very good. The premise was intensely erotic, and your writing style only added to that intensity, rather than detracted from it (as happens on a lot of other erotic stories out there)... I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you!
Great Story
Your story was so erotic it made me hard reading it and I am in my 50's
Nicely done
Hot and erotic! If this is your first story, you could have fooled me. Well written and original. Looking forward to read some more. Don't make us wait. Thanks. ML
Jeeze!
Great story!
Very good
So well written, more stories please.
WOW! Super great!
Great story! I loved it!
good accident
I thought i would just read a part of it. Could'nt stop myself from reading the whole thing. This was top stuff...keep it up for us!!!
Very good
Hot!!!
Loved the Story
This was a great story. As for the comment about not liking cheating stories, get over your moral self and realize that you are on an erotic story site. Does your wife know that you are on here reading stories?
Well done
I liked the story and I think it was a believable accident that lead them to having sex as for the comment about monster tits I don't think 36D's are monsters.
wow great story !!
plz more of your stories.
it was sooo hot.. !!! :D
Is there any doubt ?
Of course he will go to his sisters party ; are we going to hear all about it ? maybe he wants to taste her !!!
Looking forward to 2nd party!!!!
It was a very erotic story, it was well bilt to the climax. it also had a good ëxcuse" for the sex part. most stories are to easy turning in to sex, there should be some resistance.
Best I've read in a long time.
Looking forward to the next party!
Quite a tale!
That was just a fine little incest tale. It would be nice to see them continue their incestuous couplings, accidentally or otherwise. Thanks for great submission!.
Quite an original storyline
Very good story and well written. Thanks for the good read.
Hell yeah!
Of course he's gonna go to the costume party! I loved this story and look forward to reading the next one. I noticed they didn't use a condom... accidents happen! ;)
A Hot Story
What a great read. It was a well constructed plot with a great climax. I hope that you continue with the second party and beyond. Well done
damn it man!
now i have a sore arm and need a change of shorts! thanks alot..... no really, thanks and great job.
Finally, some originality!
So many stories have no forethought and seem to blend. This is unique and stands out. Awesome....write more!!
great accident
I love stories like this, where odd things happen to create sexual adventure, nice set up.
Need More Parties!!
Fantastic Story! I sincerely hope there is more, a whole new party to go to! Seriously, one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time!
Great Story Line!
I loved it! It was nice to read something different!
So kudos to you on some interesting originality.
I look forward to more original story lines from you!
Thanks for writing!
sexmate
You lied
Wow, this story was totally hot.
You lied. You said you couldn't write (lol).
Good job.
I Loved it
Best story I have read in a long time
PLEASE!!
He HAS to go the next party!! SOON!!!
OMFG!!!
HOT HOT HOT!!!!! I have had sex with siblings before but nothing as hot as this!!!!!
Fantastic
Loved it, let's hear about the 2nd. costume party! Maybe his wife needs to be the back half of the costume for a little while?
Loved it!
Seriously my favorite tale on here right now! Looking forward to the next costume party!
I like your story
I like it especially the part of under the costume was a smell of pussy. I always like sniffing dirty panties and how a pussy smells. Wish you could include in your story about incest panty sniffing.
Liked it
Well written, and very hot. I look forward to more of your work. =)
Hot and original
Nicely done author. Now on to part two, okay? Pretty please. ML
Extremely creative
The creative details that flowed along with the slowly building heat and electric excitement of eroticism left me extremely satisfied with the story's climax. The final paragraph left me happy. You left me wishing I'd grown up with sister such the one in your story. If I was a smoker, I'd have a cigarette now. Thank you.
Well done!
I've never commented on a story before but felt I just had to encourage you to write more. If this is truly your first published erotic lit then you are off to a fantastic start. Please keep writing!
Good story
even if the plot of the costume for 2 people has already been used.... it was nice and fun to read.
Keep on !
And thanks for your work
Well done!
The story was great, and your masterful use of language made it even better!
by far the best erotic story i've ever read...
keep this up. you really got it you know... would really love to see part 2.
Would love part 2, our some other story from you.
As said before good use of language.
You've got telling a story down, we'd like to see more.
WOW
Amazing story! That was soooo hot! Keep writing!
Great story.
Polished and well written
Keep up the good work, damn good story
WOW Im so HOT
Great story very erotic. I wanna go to the next party.
I didn't want it end. MMMMMMMMMMMMMM Hugs & kisses
Great first story, I hope to see more of your work
thats a really
hottttttttttttttttttttt!!! story
fantastic accident
Still one of my all-time favourites. Very HOT
Would you?
OMG...is there ANY doubt you would?....I WOULD!...More stories please!....Love the "accidental" fuck or suck fantasies.
Beautiful ...
You're good ... real good.
This by far the best spontaneous incest story in this place. Excellent job.
There was no question that part of me wanted to go... but would I?
obviously a rhetorical question lol
they'll fuck like rabbits and she'll get knocked up
sounds yummy to me
Write another chapter!
Such a hot story deserves a hot sequel!
This was very good. The premise was intensely erotic, and your writing style only added to that intensity, rather than detracted from it (as happens on a lot of other erotic stories out there)... I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you!
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