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A Poem About Boxes

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by Anonymous

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by EroticOrogeny12/11/09

Compelling

Got my attention

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by butters12/11/09

a hierarchy of boxes - how neat is that?

your work never fails to set my mind ticking, for all you say there's so much more not said but there all the same.

somehow humans tend feel safest when surrounded by parameters, whether they're boxes, hedges, or poetic 'rules'. the truly startling minds are those free to go anywhere they or someone else can imagine into being for them.

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