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by Anonymous

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by butters12/14/09

such a wealth of imagery

makes me feel enriched to have read this.

deeply original phrasing in places like "Not a pilgrim, I, but I walked out to Walsingham,
along the brown beslippered road" and "The entrance to Hell lay through such a grey hole"

That final chink of blue directs our eye, and our thoughts.

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by greenmountaineer12/14/09

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This is language at its best. I also like it because it speaks so well to a self-aware and determined human spirit.

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by UnderYourSpell12/14/09

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You captured perfectly the bitter and cold county of my birth then uplifted me to the warmth of your words

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by theognis09/13/10

*****

Excellent.

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by Velia09/13/10

Real poetry

"What faith could be found beyond the charity of friends?"

If only more of us would ponder this very question and search out the underlying value or our relationships.

And that is what poetry is about: causing us to reflect.

This is real poetry, and an excellent piece.

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by edithsaffairs09/14/10

Wonderful imagery . . .

. . . made me remember the journey from Swaffham, made me wonder if we've sipped in the same pub, perhaps rested in the same chair.

Wonderful imagery . . . but more questions still . . .

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo09/26/10

the imagery is fantastic

you are a true poet--i feel wonder in your words, there aren't too many here who write poetry with this type of complexity of meaning--i do not know how to properly describe it, not being and expert at classifying poetry

i love it--don't stop--you and a few other poets keep me trying to write my own

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by Maria239402/22/11

Espie is right

the images are wonderful. And I never had a doubt that you are a true poet. after what you said in the forum, I had to come see this poem. I gave you a five, it deserved much better.

~m

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