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This sounds like the 50s to me
No erotica per se, however a real life picture of how a red necked red blooded man deals with shit. the sad little cry for "Daddy" is the voice no one seems to hear at all today.
Too Close to Real life
I sort of disagree with the first comment left ... it sounds more like the way everyone deals with things in this day and age be they red neck or blue collar. Way too many times the children are the ones who are hurt the worst in all situtations. All in all it is a very well written story and tends to make you stop and think about what you do in your everyday life.
I disagree. Is it that real?
Story was good, and probably very close to how things would go tithe the vast majority of people in life, male or female. But I did like the added little "Daddy". I already have predjudice against writers who always have the hot wife a mother as well. Children are all too often never even really considered.
I disagree. Is it that real?
Story was good, and probably very close to how things would go tithe the vast majority of people in life, male or female. But I did like the added little "Daddy". I already have predjudice against writers who always have the hot wife a mother as well. Children are all too often never even really considered.
short but sweet...
I am sorry he took his own life while his daughter was in the house or around, but he did what a lot of wimpy, cum sucking, ass pussy men, male sluts abused by their wives and cuckolds are supposed to do. To tell the truth if the daughter can reconize who her parents, why was the wife fucking a stranger in their house with the door ajar for the daughter to see and witness.
Wow.....
Ok this one took me by surprise. Good set up and showed the confusion that the man went through, the emotional scarring that he was receiving.
And the "Daddy" twist was just .....well.. priceless. Short but a keeper.
A Real Man.
It is so nice to read about a real man for a change. This way he gets custody of the child the way it should be instead of the slut wife.
Otherwise, with the mess caused by the lawyers and courts he not only would have lost his child but would have to pay support for a child that was no longer his.
no
this is to close to home for me sorry
Excellent Dramatic Work
Why he let the scene play out instead of pre-empting is a mystery to me, but then how he took the decision to pull the trigger after having been frozen is another mystery. Extreme creative writing.
HELL OF A WAY TO GET NOTICED
and then they were all gone EXCEPT FOR THE FAMILIES. TK U MLJ LV NV
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