Sex Education

Teacher to Bimbo

Interesting idea but why replace her when you can use all day long

Very enjoyable

You are one seriously twisted individual. Fantastic read. Keep it up.

They Aren't Learning Enough

It's a sex education class, but it doesn't seem they are practising safe sex. Usually it's fine to skip the condoms and risks of STD's and pregnancy in fiction, but this is one story where leaving them out actually detracts from the plot! If you really didn't want to include it you could have fixed it with one simple line by saying she's immune to carrying disease and sterile, and that he'd rather they focus on technique or something like that.

Overall, I'm not very impressed.

It seems a little plagiarised

It was quite an amusing little story, but it reads as if some of the lines and most of the story idea were plagiarised from the scene of the sex education class at the English boys' public school in Monty Python's "The Meaning of Life."

WOW

You have a great talent,for wanting the reader to become involved with your stories
That to me is Awesome and I Thank you,Please keep on writing and I will keep on reading

That was really good you should definitely write more!

Sorry.

But this just seems far too unrealistic. I was tempted to give it 3 stars because it's very detailed and it has the classical happy ending, but there are too many factors that you haven't taken into consideration. Too many to list, either. I'm sorry, but you get 2 stars from me. Keep it up though-you can get anything done if you put your mind to it enough :)