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Nice
Just need to shorten the names, i had a very hard time trying to figure out how to say them.
Interesting
i enjoyed that its definetly a start to what a real story could blossom from trully looking forward to the next chapters so please contine to write this story
Like it Very Much
Thank you for posting the story. I'm a fan of Japanese manga. I really like it, it's a good start. It actually felt like reading a manga minus the graphics. Keep writing and posting please^_^
Good Story
Nice I'm hoping for alot more of this story.
First chapter sets off the adventure mode and I
wait impatiently for the next one.
You might want to send a chapter to Stories on Line
to see what they think of it.
Piqued my interest
Can't wait to read future installments. Hope they live up to my expectations and I reeeally hope they won't be far apart time wise.
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