J.J. and His Sin (Cyn)

Nothing like a home away....

....from home! He enjoyed the benefits of not being cuffed to the corporate hitching post,so he could protect his woman with only the law to answer to. And she wasn't even a redhead. And as the saying goes "The law is an ass."

Real Fine Story

I suppose there will be a staunch defender of honor saying that our hero was a wimp because he did not arrange for a nice alibi and then kill Tony. But putting old-style justice aside J.J. did everything perfectly except for the table dance...
I can not resist commenting that the more we try to refine the law, the more the number of stupid consequences increase.
Between civil law and criminal law everything can be dangerous unless you have really fine backup... I myself compare the short and direct US constitution to the 500 page constitutions in Latin countries, but prefer the British unwritten constitution since no one can appeal to it.

Really liked it (^_^)

I was torn between his liking how his kicked their butts or how his wife eventually came to him about her problem, but didn't take offense at him trying to help her out.

And the ending as well was cool. I was thinking that he ran into them again, but the I realized it right before the ending what was going on and it made me smile

Nice story and it was very good (^_^)

-Risq

awesome

that was pretty awesome. by the time he gets to telling the third reason why he was jail, you're thinking he killed tony, but that he was celebrating was just plain awesome. kudos to you!

Great as usual

Didn't see the end till the last moment.Well done sir!

Great story, well written and thought out

As is usual for Woodmanone, this story is excellent. I enjoyed reading it. It's a story that could also go into the "Loving Wives" category. RAG

Wonderful writer

I always enjoy a story that is written by Woodmanone. His stories are always entertaining and interesting. This is typical fine story.
60 year old George

Well done!

Great read and very entertaining.

Again, my hat's off to you--

I really like this style of writing and you do it well. Thanks.

Twist

I like the way your stories have a little twist to them like the second jail time - not for what would be expected.

GREAT BETTER THAN ALL THAT CUCKOLD SHIT

Run, Forrest, run

This is not really a comment about this story but about L.I.G. (life in general). If I ever ran into a tall, leggy redhead with freckles running across her nose, I would ask her one question and one question only. I would ask her which direction she was going and, then, RUN as fast and as far as I could in the opposite direction.

A lot of fun

And well played -

Very nice read and excellent execution of the story line -

Good character development and nicely paced.

Funny ending, thanks!

5* Damn Fine Story!

Title says it all.

You have done it again. Nuff said.

Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Home Run!

Enough with the strikeouts, this was a Home Run. Very fine story. Finally, we have a guy who does everything right. It is his duty to protect his wife...and he did! Thank you for a wonderful story...with a happy ending. 'You're Back'

Another good story except...

At the very end. It seemed like she had to go to her parents and tell her mom that she was pregnant before she told her husband? Another case of not sharing everything with your spouse. He should come first before everyone. And she gets mad at him for beating the guys who drugged and tried to rape her? Please!

Really?

Long story for all that. Seems kind of anti-climactic. I mean, all that, just to find
out his wife is pregnant? Sorry, not much of a story for my taste.