All Comments on 'Playing Hooky Ch. 04'

by BrettJ

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larrywanderslarrywandersabout 14 years ago
what the hell???

"Slow down bitch, this isn't a race," Martine commanded, having a bit of fun being in the driver's seat for once. She saw a wide grin cross Julie's face; evidently she was making her daughter happy as well.

Martine = Sabrina the mom?

Makes me wonder two things about the story. One - who did you plagiarize this from. OR Two - how many different times have you written the same story for different sites with different character names?

hammer17hammer17about 13 years ago
great

It's a great story, I loved it, but why don't you finish it? I noticed that a lot of your stories are unfinished..

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