So... The story started out from a third person point of view, then somehow magically transformed into first person which halted the entire story. Maybe you should edit your stories better--or at least read them once through.
I still love the story; yes tehre could have been more relation in the way of writing it... but who cares, next time it will be even better and nastier:-) right?
There's a good reason ...
All the stories you have submitted and only have one big red H rating. Just give it up and quit wasting our time.
Ummm?
So... The story started out from a third person point of view, then somehow magically transformed into first person which halted the entire story. Maybe you should edit your stories better--or at least read them once through.
fuck you all!
I still love the story; yes tehre could have been more relation in the way of writing it... but who cares, next time it will be even better and nastier:-) right?
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