All Comments on 'Nearly Nude in School'

I know this was a fantasy, but still, among the most poorly written and implausible stories on literotica.com. Sarah doesn't notice someone sneaking up on her and putting a fish hook (!) in her dress? Seriously.

The idea was erotic, I dont mind the fishhook part, it is an old classic prank that I personally know has been used. So while "unusual" I did not find it unrealistic. I will say though that I felt it was far too short and missed a lot of detail and descriptiveness which if added could have amplified it to a better story.