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Enslaved in Europe Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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I want to go to Sessia!!

I love these erotic tales of Sessia, and I would go there, if only that were possible!!

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by Anonymous12/19/09

Worth the wait!

I waited months for chapter five to come out, but it was well worth the wait. Diane's adventures as a sex slave are HOT!! If I could go to Sessia and visit the punishment parks, I'd be on the internet booking my plane tickets right now!!

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by Leather_Lesbian12/19/09

WOW!

I'd like to say something more elaborate, but most of the blood in my body seems to have rushed to my clit and very little blood is getting to my brain. This story has me so hot and bothered I'm barely capable of forming sentences!!!

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by ChrissieLecker12/20/09

Brilliant writing and unbelievably erotic

Please, please write more of that story! It's absolutely brilliant, the perfect story if such a thing exists. I can't even decide what parts of it were best, as there is not even the smallest something to criticise. I'll be watching out for new chapters every day from now on.

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by sexysarah8912/27/09

Poor Diane's Bottom

Loved the story spanking is one of my favourites. I hope you carry on writing. Reading your stoires make me so horny

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by Anonymous01/12/10

Enjoy the Punishment Park!

I can't wait to see how Diane "enjoys" her punishments in the next chapter!

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by Dryhill08/12/10

PITY

It is apity that a what started out as a really good idea and excellent story has degenerated into the bulk standard "nasty overly harsh Mistress who gets her kicks from hurting her slave" type of story.

The author has given very clear characterizations of her two main females and Gretchen was never shown to be this spiteful person. So either the author has forgotten who Gretchen is or the latter is suffering from an undiagnosed aneurysm that is causing a change in her personality.

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by Martiniman02/03/12

Pure perfection

Everytime I read this story it just gets better & better! It's D/s eroticism to perfection!!!

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by Bahama12/07/12

Awesome

Cant get enough

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by thekeenreader03/16/14

ensnared by lust

I love F/f & M/f stories where the submissives own lust drives her forward and leads her deeper and deeper into her own imprisonment. Your stories have this theme throughout and it's wonderful

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by Anonymous06/24/14

Too cold...

As much as I would enjoy the cold, harsh treatment by strangers to the main character, it just sound awful when it's her own girlfriend going way too far. Everything would be absolutely acceptable if there was at least some show of care by Gretchen, like passionate kissing, whispering sweet/naughty things all the time, to mark her place but at the same time reassure Diane. Without that it just sounds too cold, and I'm half expecting either for her to go too far and scar Diane (physically or mentally), or Diane to just finally stand up and break up with her (and be successful in getting out of the country, since I can probably guess this wont end after a week, whether Diane likes it or not)...

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by Anonymous04/08/17

Ugh, man, this ongoing punishment & being exposed to strangers being all heartless, her mistress being all cold all the time really gets tiring & boring.
I read Claiming Katy (all chars female) & although this is much more cruel, there's so much more heart in it. The characters are lively, have ll their very own personality AND ...there's at least some care/aftercare there, although not much.
That story is written by man! But it's less cold than this one.
Don't understand how lesbians can write without any emotionality.
But well, that's the majority of stories. No real depth there. Just something to get off on. But well, for that you don't need a long story. A long story needs highs and pauses. Thrills & something to relax. Those on and ongoing pain without any care inbetween is just... I'm repeating myself draining/tiring & boring.
(Also I don't know how often I red: "it seemed as that went on for hours, although it was just minutes" (or sthg like that.) - maybe try to use a different phrase inbetween?
I'm stopping to read now - wasted my time, hoped it would get better eventually. D/s has an emotional depth which I can't find here. I think it's more just S/M but also without the needed connection/depth.

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by Anonymous04/27/17

It's too cold and that's not how waxing works

I agree with the other comments of its getting too cold and abuse-like. Aside from that, I'm enjoying it though and I'll keep reading for now.

As someone who gets a Brazilian wax about once every 5 weeks and finds them unusually painful, I feel the need to correct you on some parts. From what you were describing, Diane got a Brazilian wax (closer to the lips), not a bikini wax (which typically just covers the bikini line. There's different types of Brazilian waxes as well (including inner lips, leaving a 'landing strip', and including/excluding around the anus).

There isn't actually many nerve endings around the anus, which means that part barely hurts at all. Also, in order for the beautician to wax further back, you have to be in one of a couple of awkward/embarrassing positions, which would have been cool to mention.

The first wax always hurts the most, but if you have been shaving and switch to waxing, it hurts even more because your hair is thicker due to being constantly cut. After the wax, especially the first one, being naked is probably the best thing, the skin is really tender. In order for waxing to be effective, the hair does need to be a minimum length, which is probably too long to satisfy the laws of Sessia. But once performed, could probably be maintained with tweezers daily.

Also, some the laws of Sessia (the ones that require slaves to be naked and hairless) are silly cause it should be the slave owners decision/command, not the governments who is just facilitating the contract.

I'm thinking about this far too much, but I go through too much pain for to allow misconceptions to go unexplained, even in erotica.

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