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Great story
This is the first time that Ive ran across your stories.. I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.. Please hurry up with the next installment :)
Need info
Could you please gives us more information on the vampires, and why did they kill women and children of the pack. But besides that it's a wonderful story and I am so glad you came back with another chapter.
PLEASE POST SOON.
great
im so excited that you posted another chapter! I cant wait for the evening/night...i hope she doesnt get away. I want Donovan to catch up to her..and mate. lol.Please post the next chapter asap.
Loved it
Aww bless her,she beat up a kid.lol.am really enjoying this story.looking forward to the rest to see what happens.
A New Chapter! Yay!
Been waiting for a new chapter for a while. Thanks for continuing this excellent story. Can't wait for more. :)
Great!
I'm really enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
love it!
absolutely love it! love the humor and dry sarcasm of katherine! keep up the good work
I loved...
...This! It was awesome! keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
MORE MORE MORE
Im reading this for the story the naughty stuff is just an added bonus .. keep it up cant wait for more.
Awesome story!
I can't wait to read more! This is one of the best for me!!
The Run
Eeek!!! I can't wait to read the part of when she tries to outrun Alex, lol joke, Donvan.
Love the story, write more please!
I love Daniel and Joe. They seem like good guys. I'm torn in understanding why Donovan is the way he is, and not liking how he's gone about trying to find a mate. I'd like to know more about how the other wolves typically find mates. Do they just go off and bite a female they find? I think the other wolves are quite hard on Donovan and treat him like is insane so why should he act differently? I hope that she doesn't fall for Joe b/c that would just finish Donovan off.
Prof-read
The story is really good so far. However, some of the sentences do not make sense. It might be a good idea to read your story out loud before you post it. That way you can catch all the wording mistakes you missed. Keep up the good work!!
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