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A Craving for Cock Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/16/04

Good work

Its good work a little jumpy from person to person but still very hot

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by Anonymous03/06/05

very hot

Loved the story, very hot and well written. Am looking forward to reading more!

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by Anonymous08/06/05

incest

this should be under incest/taboo category.

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by Anonymous08/31/05

need more description

needs more description IE: her asshole slowly expanded to engulf his hard cock. She moaned in pain as it slid in but he stopped and waited as she relaxed more then started pushing in slowly again. or she screamed in agony as he brutaly forced his swolen cock up her ass, the ripe pucker pressed inward with each stroke until he was fully embeded into her dry asshole

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by Anonymous07/17/07

it was good but more detail

u needed more detail it takes more time 2 find an anal story than it does 2 read 1 and itsa shame altho thers a guy hu goes by damon x hu writes them really well

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by Hislittlebitch08/02/07

naughty, naughty!

I really enjoyed this sweet little nugget of naughtiness! I do agree that more detail would've been nice, and smoother character transitions, but I understand completely. Sometimes, the story comes all on its own, and it's much like an orgasm....you can't stop, direct, delay, or refine it. It just has to come!
Thoroughly enticing plot, though. And, for me, at least, INCREDIBLY satisfying! I'm all but dripping my own wetness onto the chair right now!
Yum!

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by Anonymous12/28/07

GREAT STORY!!!

this story was hot, well written and contains just the right amount of imagery to satisfy your kinky-taboo-anal fantasy!

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by Anonymous01/20/08

IT WAS BORING

IT TOOK TO LONG TO GET TO THE PLOT.

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by inherhole02/14/10

Eating my girlfriend thinking of her father,

In first grade I met my girlfriend for life. We had a swimming pool in our yard and during the summer the two of us swam everyday. Our mothers worked in the city and our fathers worked at home. We would sleep together at night and usually naked. By fourth grade we both started growing breasts and hair everywhere. We were different than other girls because we like our hair and never shaved. By sixth grade we both had double D breasts and when we slept together we would play with each others breasts and cunts. We both loved teasing our fathers mainly because we both would overhear our mothers always saying that they were tried or just leave them alone. So as we turned fourteen one summer we talked our fathers into swimming with us one day. We both intended to fuck each others father and then fuck our own father. As it turned out it worked better than we had hoped. Since our mothers were not letting our fathers fuck them it was easy for us to get them to fuck us. What neither one us did not know at the time was our fathers had put pin holes in our mothers diaphragms and they both had become pregnant by their bosses. The neat thing was that they both were against aborting and each of there bosses was very black. At first our mothers got real mad at our fathers for getting them pregnant. And then nine months later my mother had three black daughters and my friends mother had three black daughters and a black son. Our fathers told their wives that they could stay married to them if they wanted to but that their daughters would be sleeping in their fathers bed from now on. Now I have sisters to play with and each of our mothers is pregnant again with black babies in them.

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by Anonymous08/19/10

Amen

broooz i love how the story made sense, but how old is jim? like fourty-eight?

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by Anonymous01/22/12

Greatt!!!!

It was fucking great!!!!

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by Anonymous03/29/13

Wendy too?

Would love to see Wendy go back and get fucked in the ass by daddy. After all, what's good for Toni should be even better for Wendy. Then let Wendy's mother walk in on her and daddy, Mom gets hot and horny, letting Wendy lick her pussy and ass to get her ready for daddy's big cock.
dale

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Feeding the beast.

The story was just downright hot. I got hard as a rock and my pre-cum dribbled like a faucet. He should have spent more time preparing her tail hole though. By spreading her ass cheeks wide and thoroughly licking and sucking her asshole while tongue fucking her to an orgasm. More detailed descriptions of the scent and taste would be great. 5 stars.

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by Anonymous11/14/15

The Greatest

Your stories are just fucking HOT, both my Wife and I fuck to your stories playing them out. When she is not in the mood I come here and jack off to them and cum very hard. GREAT WORK.

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