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Paddlin' Madelyne Home Ch. 01

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by AzPilot12/18/09

I like your style of writing. Very good.

I like the smooth writing of the older writers, not the "rub your face in it" formula stuff put out by the younger, less experienced ones. This was a very good example for the others. I enjoyed every aspect of it. Thank you for a very good read.

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by bruce2212/18/09

Yep, a very good read!

Excellent writing and imaginative plotting. Unfortunately, for me the BDSM reduces my enthusiasm so I can not say that I enjoyed it. It is an admirable piece of work and rates five stars

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by Anonymous12/19/09

A good start.

This is a good start to what could be a wonderful story. I look forward to chapter two.

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