All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 11'

Oh my god it was soooo short lol youve got to hurry up with the next installment please! I am delightfully hooked on this story :)

Hope we get an extra long chapter next week to make up for it. I look forward to your story every Saturday and I think this has been the only Saturday where I've felt disappointed after reading the chapter. Extremely unsatisfying. I would have rated this chapter at 50 but I'm assuming the length is a fluke and giving you the benefit of the doubt. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to a more substantial chapter next week.

I know that, you had to have had a very good reason why you made this chapter short.

But, please write the next chapter asap!! I need to know what happens!!

you cant leave us hanging lyk tht.. please please pleash hurry.... :)

cant believe you just did that.a bloody cliffhanger.i need more,your stories are like a drug,am now going cold turkey,cos it was too short.please hurry up......(merry crimbo)

Well that plan went horribly wrong. Poor Hunter. Good thing Liam has a healing ability. I've always thought it somewhat odd that Liam's power is to heal. But maybe there's a reason for that. Anyway, Alauria sure has moxie. Any chance she can moxie herself out of that situation? She has been through a lot, supernatural and otherwise. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Kinda crazy to have Alauria severely abused in such a way, should have been Lindsay (why not have Raife go right for the one who deceived her instead of innocents) with Alauria and the brethren seeking his rescue. Seems like the demons always get to creatively/overly abuse others; how about a reversal once the demons are caught, instead of a quick kill or banishment have them and their minions receive a more creative form of punishment.

I hate it when you leave it in suspence lol.. Hurry up!!! lol.. No pressure I understand its the holidays

Though this one was short it had a full deck of features inclueding a good cliffhanger ending. Do hurry with all due deliberation to the next chapter and take time to enjoy the holladays.

Thank You for the addition to the story line. I hope that the rest of the story will be coming soon. I am enjoying them very much. Please keep up the good work.

that you are a woman :o) cos that was so short.. it was a tease xN

to check your bio.. been wanting to do it since i came across your account - but your stories are so enveloping that i couldn't pull myself away to check, till now xN

not that it has gotten any less interesting.. i just couldnt put the urge off anymore and needed to know a little bit about you