All Comments on 'Mallie's One Night Plan'

by johnnieblue44

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DawnJDawnJabout 12 years ago
Awwww!

Ya got me in the heart, here, John! What an unexpected and precious little gift this story is! If Mallie had resisted, imagine what she would have missed! A sweetheart of a tale!

LouisCipher01LouisCipher01over 10 years ago
Great.

It is about time you finished a story properly! My only gripe is that most of your stories leave the reader hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Editor!

Ya need one, bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
wonderful!

Even apart from occasional errors in grammar, this is a beautifully told romance story, with appealing characters, and a carefully constructed plot. Appropriately, this all too short love story full of tenderness, and the romantic mood pervades throughout. The story concludes with the happily ever after ending. Malle's One Night is a joy to read. It is a shame that this author has not written more Romance stories.

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