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Mallie's One Night Plan

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by DawnJ03/26/12

Awwww!

Ya got me in the heart, here, John! What an unexpected and precious little gift this story is! If Mallie had resisted, imagine what she would have missed! A sweetheart of a tale!

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by LouisCipher0111/05/13

Great.

It is about time you finished a story properly! My only gripe is that most of your stories leave the reader hanging!

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