by justboycrazy
"...her husband of twenty-five years..." and she was a "38-year-old..." She would have to have married and conceived at 13. Still a very sexy story, just check your math.
Loved the story, although I would have liked more contrast between the nude male and the mother's clothed state.
This is actually cute. The mom got dick for Christmas from her thoughtful daughter. I'm just wondering how he got in the house if he's in the box. Probably a set of keys provided to him? Does he become her boytoy after Christmas? This has some potential to be developed further.
But, as others have noted, the age has to be off. Besides, she'd be a whole lot sexier if she were 48. Another nitpick: who wears a bra with pajamas??
As I said, it's a cute story with an interesting premise, but needs to be developed more as the holidays fade into the new year. Maybe there's a birthday gift as well?? A "boy toy of the month??" Good start, something to build on.