by ILienBagby
So small, hardly there at all, BUT! Higher scores await you dear author with ensuing chapters. I see you have number two already in que. Do mix in a dash or two of nc/reluctant spice.
I'm hoping this xmas season to read about this lovely co-ed being taken at least three times thrice.
I'm just surprised that your 616 words made the cut-off. You have the beginnings of a good story.