Paddlin' Madelyne Home Ch. 03

Good Story

Really fine writing and characters. At the end of the first chapter I prematurely mentioned my dislike for BDSM, which took some of the luster off an otherwise great story. It makes it something that I can not reccomend to friends! It had been my hope that the rewrite would involve some other resolution, though apparently with her, the wish to humiliate is simply the foreplay to her being punished.

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you've got to admit, this was one fucked up story, haha. it should have been in the humor section because it was funny as hell man! now, to the important part, when are you gonna make a third installment in the Arc Deco series? they were pretty cool and im really curious to see how you handle zaks new powers and life. im counting on you!

Quite a tale!

Thanks for an amusing little ride.

Thanks for a great read. It was just fun.

Bad Ending Not up to your usual quality.

You've basically made you're characters completely different people quote of the protagonist from earlier "but I'm very much a one woman man" and he ends up being very much not and you don't really give a good enough explanation as to why so the characters own words become false. Also this is incorrectly tagged the final part of this story should be BDSM as there is no romance only BDSM.

This tells me either you got bored and just wanted it to end or you forced the ending i.e. you had an ending in mind and no matter where the characters led you you would have the desired ending even though it made little sense in context.

Thanks, I liked it

a lot. I don't get hung up on minor mistakes very often if the story is worth reading through them. This one definetely was worth it.

I can't handle bdsm so I could not identify completely with the poor guy, but I did enough to really enjoy the story. I, also, am a (retired) structural/civil engineer and I strongly resemble Dilbert sometimes, but I do enjoy engineer jokes and both he and she were jokes often.

Keep on writin' bud, I have enjoyed all of your stories I have so far read (alphabetically) through this one.

Lynn, registered P.E.

Hilarious

Very amusing story......not bad at all. Good read.

Bad bad end

This story started out well but went into the cesspool at the end. No Good.