All Comments on 'The Wedding Ch. 07'

I enjoyed this story and the series a LOT. Ignore the detractors (re: this story apparently just one). Keep on keeping on.

If you don't like the story don't read it. It states that this is ch 7, so I'm assumiming that you may all have read ch 1-6 and if you didn't like them why do you insist on reading this one and then trashing it.

To the author: Ignore all the idiots and keep writing, as there are some people on the site that are enjoying the story.

love this series, keep it cumming!

If the person being ugly had time to make inapproptiate comments then they need help. You are doing wonderful, ignore those who bring you down and accept your praise with grace. I hope you continue writing.

this series was just so sexy, glad I only read the 1 and last because these where so bad I am flushing my eyes out with acid.

Hubby knows his redhead slut got fucked last night, as he has found cum all over (and in) her. She verifies his suspicions and tells him pretty much just what she went through. She "hints" that at the beach she is likely to get fucked by three men, and he follows as she rushes out.

He seems oblivious when three men get close, with one of the men approaching to slather his wife with lotion. He is cluelesss to her reaction and misses as she flees to the ocean, where she does indeed get fucked.

Because he fell ASLEEP?!?

C'mon..

Woods_Lord3540

More please!

I loved these stories and would love some more!

or last a lot. TK U MLJ LV NV

I have read all 7 of your submissions. Lovely plot, great slut wife and easy writing style. While a couple of the points seem a bit over the top (unlikely) the story is plausible and hot. Nice description of the hot wife but the husband seems like a real dolt.

As a fellow writer on Literotica and one who also has a hot and adventuresome wife your stories resonate with me and that is the mark of a good writer. Keep up the good work and don't pay any attention to the idiots who only like to criticize those of us who write for their pleasure.

Keep on writing and keeping us informed of this hot wife.

Chapter of Chpter 1 and the last of Chpt. and I can truly say that Iwished I had those 40 seconds back. What a load of complete horses hit. If time travel is ever invented it should be to go back in time and not write this crap.

since its been awhile that the swinger scum who wrote this has died from aids or an aids related illness as have any people who approved of her lifestyle, fucking swingers are disgusting trash.

Ps7468

I have nothing negative about your writing style. My concern centred on the decline of your tale from chapter to chapter that really turned into a how many sex partners and positions can I squeeze into each section. The hubby character was portayed as a cuck wimp who got off on the fact that others were lining up to give his slut wife a good seeing to. It was a bit like fucking by numbers and over time became somwhat boring and decreasingly erotic. One presumes that no protection in the form of condoms were used which greatly increased the likelihood of VD russian roulette.

Not really asleep getting more proof of a cheater.

Trash