It's a pretty, loving story, one that I know has been played out for real. The thrill, the knowledge that this creates life.
Wow.
On the editing side, I think a little tightening up would do it more justice (there's an "of" instead of "off," for example), and some word choices. But it's great; please continue!
English
Sweet & potent
It's a pretty, loving story, one that I know has been played out for real. The thrill, the knowledge that this creates life.
Wow.
On the editing side, I think a little tightening up would do it more justice (there's an "of" instead of "off," for example), and some word choices. But it's great; please continue!
A good story with a good ending
The story is a lot different than I thought it would be, and I'm pleasantly surprised.Thanks for the good story.
BEautiful
when husband and wife agree that it's time for another one to be added to the two of them...
Beautiful and erotic
A beautiful story is quite rare for Literotica. Well done!
Also quite erotic. It doesn't hurt that this is a fantasy of mine. But I enjoyed reading a story that is not merely erotic.
Nice one
Lucky guy. I love a woman whose eager to get knocked up by me
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