I love older woman, younger man stories and really liked your portrayal of the boyfriend's reaction to his fiancee's total lack of restraint.
Unfortunately, I've got a bone to pick with you re: the female characters-- they're pretty, useless, narcissistic dolts!
Neither the mama or the daughter seem to have any redeeming qualities beyond being cute and making happy monkey noises
with whomever's available.
I don't expect Wuthering Heights-level romance, or that every gal be MENSA material, but damn, these are some simple sluts. It's Lego-sex, and you can do much better than that.
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The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From The Tree
I love older woman, younger man stories and really liked your portrayal of the boyfriend's reaction to his fiancee's total lack of restraint.
Unfortunately, I've got a bone to pick with you re: the female characters-- they're pretty, useless, narcissistic dolts!
Neither the mama or the daughter seem to have any redeeming qualities beyond being cute and making happy monkey noises
with whomever's available.
I don't expect Wuthering Heights-level romance, or that every gal be MENSA material, but damn, these are some simple sluts. It's Lego-sex, and you can do much better than that.
Kudos!
Really enjoyed this story. Very well written and very sexy. Great job!
Fantastic
Really a great story. Everything works. I was only left wanting more. Thanks and keep writing!
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