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A Bad Day in Dream World

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by Pistolpackinpete01/09/10

You have the makings of ....

...a writer but need to practice the format of a story, not just a 'passage'. For instance, since your description states it, have her actually "go" there, first. Not many people like to read one page out of the middle of a book.

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by Anonymous02/01/10

This was confusing...

As the other person said, its like a passage out of the middle of a book. How did Gwen get there, what is the history of the dream world, and who is this lover of her's?

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by Kardas06/17/10

Not bad, not bad at all.

I've read quite a few tentacle sex stories, but not many authors can quite pull it off. You also brought a very surreal feeling to the story, quite appropriate to the setting. A highly creative and arousing tale, great work.

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by Anonymous03/13/11

Pleasing

I can successfully say you executed this story i loved it best tentacle sex storie ever

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by Anonymous12/29/11

Mmmm, i wouldnt call that a BAD day!! i would love to be double fucked by tentacles!

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by Anonymous01/01/17

I want more of this story as well please because I want to see what happens to her. So please more chapters of this story as well please.Thank you very much.

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