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Very good story but one suggestion--
your paragraphs were a bit long. The first one too long for comfortable reading. Other than that, very good.
Beautifully written!
I really liked your beautifully written story it just captured the thoughts and feelings of your main character.
I hope you will write another chapter.
Merry Christmas!
Fantastic & Moving
Thank you for sharing such a touching story that brings together the past & present, 2 different couples lives and the comparison of it all from the viewpoint of Graham. All though this story is perfect and complete, it would be interesting to find out how things went for both couples. But, that might ruin the impact of this story. I hope you will continue to share your wonderful talent with us. I look forward to more.
fell asleep
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