You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.
You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.
Wow. This sounds like me. Though I'm sill waiting to meet that dream guy. But I had a dream just like that last year around Christmas.
I'm in the same place Taryn...minus the sleeping with the ex. lol. Long boring story short...I hope you continue this. I'd like to read at least one happy dream come true. =]
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Anonymous12/28/09
Great Beginning...where's the rest?? More please
Loved this beginning. I would really like to see more!
by
Anonymous12/28/09
you had me @ The Script
Loved them as MYTOWN, still love them now. I'll definitely keep reading to find out how coo coo psycho Cydney manages to woo Taryn.
English
Next chapter?
Sooo looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Keep going!
Keep going with the next chapter. I really want to know what happens next.
Nice start
Im really looking forward to the next chapter. This could turn into something good. :)
**lilmami07**
Great
Great start, can't wait to read the next chapter
LOVED the story
You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.
LOVED the story
You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.
Please Continue!
Can't wait to see what you have in store for these two.
wow
yes you have to continue with this story wow loving it
sounds real good
this sound really great so far. keep it going.
your story
Pleasee continue this story!!!
Continue it please!!!!!
Wow. This sounds like me. Though I'm sill waiting to meet that dream guy. But I had a dream just like that last year around Christmas.
I'm in the same place Taryn...minus the sleeping with the ex. lol. Long boring story short...I hope you continue this. I'd like to read at least one happy dream come true. =]
Great Beginning...where's the rest?? More please
Loved this beginning. I would really like to see more!
you had me @ The Script
Loved them as MYTOWN, still love them now. I'll definitely keep reading to find out how coo coo psycho Cydney manages to woo Taryn.
This is Hilarious
Please continue.
more please
i want to know what happens next. very unique story. please more!
I like it
A little more editing wouldn't hurt, but I like it.
MORE PLEASE
this story i unique i loved it all and cant wait for next next chapter
promising....
:) can't wait for more.
Great start
Thanks for a great read.
ummm
this is unusually, yet very intriguing.
Okay,,,,,,
Cydney is really creepy and the spelling of his name annoys me. (sadface)
You had me at Before the Worst
I love the script too much to not continue!
Spur of the moment
I decided to give you a try and I'm really liking this already and the title doesn't hurt either.
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