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Deleted Scenes - Amok Time

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by Anonymous09/13/11

Spocks Skin & Blood color

very good story one flaw or drawback though;Consider my bone to pick this Spock is half human
which have Iron based blood red in oxygenated state.
Vulcans have copper based Copper is Greenish in weathered or oxidated state so I guess green or even olive in a Oxygenated state.
red and green make brown
so his dick when engorged or facial blushing should be brown not green!!!! and not a pasty pink human color

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by Anonymous06/18/13

Nicely done

Most fanfiction about Spock has him doing things that Spock would never do, but your story is different; this feels much more like the real Spock. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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by Anonymous06/30/13

Christine and Spock

I always felt sorry for Christine and her unrequited love/lust for Mr. Spock. Thanks for letting her get some!
Just one little point: Mr. Spock is not hairless,as all of us Trek fans know.

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