All Comments on 'The Artifact Ch. 03'

your stories are the best on the site right now.give us more of them.

Got a New Girl. and a Job onstage.

Can't wait to see how it plays out after Good and Evil Fight.

Brilliant! I have read all three chapters and love the way you built the story up! :) I can't wait for further chapters! :)

I really am enjoying this story and I don't want to wait to long for the next chapter. Well done.

a guy tried to write a story about being given power, sort of like this story here, by some highly advanced aliens who told the man they could do any thing for him, since they have studied the human race inside out... any thing he asks, they can give it to him. <p>

he didn't ask for money, gold, chemical formulas, equations that can assist physicists, knowledge about biochemical processes and viral replications and mechanisms, or any other such nonsense. no, he asks that the alines make his dick a few inches bigger, so he could fuck his unfaithful wife's ass and make her hurt! <p>

seriously? why do people write such nonsense? when you are offer knowledge of the universe --- from reading minds to being allowed to make wishes for great knowledge of the universe --- and you gather a few women and just fuck from one day to the next? LOL! <p>

the minds, the "creativity," of some of these "authors" boggle my mind sometimes...

I'm so glad you came back to this story. I have really enjoyed it and am liking where things are heading so far. I waould have given you 5 stars except I had the oddest sense of deja vu for part of it. But I still think its great and am looking forward to more chapters from you. :)

for continuing this story. If its going to be another long interval before the next submission, I suggest writing a short synopsis; its annoying having to go back and read over the earlier chapters.

I love all your submissions keep up the great work. :)

I think it's a testament of your literary skill that I read this story for it's plot, and enjoy the sex on the side! That's almost a first for me on this site.

Thank you for the good read!

Please more soon

A very interesting story, please add more when you can, i find myself looking for your story before any others, keep it up ...Nova

I loved it and gave this chapter a 5 as this is the best series on this sight i ahve come across and trust me I ahve read thousands of the stories on here over the 10+ years I have known this site.

To clarify the title, I thought this was good, but chapters 1 & 2 were a lot better. Just a general better flow to the stories, where this one had a rushed feel to it. Will keep searching for The Artifact Ch. 04 but please take your time and make it as awesome as the first 2.

Domo arigato gozaimasu.

I really like your writing, story, and creativity. Not as keen on the harem-building. 4.5 stars is not an option.

i agree with ever one. Please wright more of this as soon as you can!

I'm giving you a 5 because you try to do the things a real writer should: character development and motivation, a "logical plot" (within the context of your story), and having fun! Keep writing.

I'm glad to see another chapter to this fine story. Looking forward to the next submission. As always with your work this is very good.

and hurry

this story is well thought

great story line

and want more

this story is one of the best that i have read on literotica. i am interested in where it will lead next!!!!!!!!! so please make a fourth part and fast!!!! please

This is superbly written. The sex is great but the storyline is what makes this exceptional. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Like your dear Mr. Katz, you manage to make this story fun, interesting, and constantly sexy. You also manage to keep some pretty weighty themes in the foreground without beating us over the head with them. I cannot do what you do, so I insist that you continue.

....do we get "more" of this GREAT story ? I

personally hope it evolves into a 15 to 30

chapter mega-adventure with a couple

sequels thrown in for good measure. You've

created a great storyline with well established

characters to take in any direction.

Thanks "Doc"

Can't wait for chapter 4 and others, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story. Its the best i've read so far in Literotica. I like the plot, its not too predictable and the sex is balanced on the story plot. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

Will you please write a lot more of this story as it is one of the best stories that I have read thank you for the first three chapters.

I like the story line.. but you seem to have a habit of not finishing off a story!

You seem to like to leave them hanging with out closing them out.

I sure hope you finish off this story and your Ill always take care of you story line. I have enjoyed them both so far.

looking forward to chapter four!

Another great chapter for both this one and the chapter 2 :) keep up the great work :D

hopefully you will have another chapter up soon. It would sadden us all if you decided to drop this story or if you have lost your muse.

One of the best stories i've read in awhile. More!

I just couldn't stop reading this story. One of the best I have ever read. Please continue........

I hope that you are able to continue this story line as I really enjoy reading it

Please continue this story, it is one of the best I have read, Your combinig sex into the story line was superbly done.

I am enjoying this epic tale of the struggle between good and evil, white knights vs. black forces, but mostly I enjoy the artifact's crew of sweepers which come and clean the residue and iron the sheets every time Jack and his harem head for the showers to share a round of wetwash BJ's.

Will Jack face multiple dark forces in years ahead? Will he become engaged in the epic struggle for civil rights in America and ride to victory between the sleek thighs of his own dark beauty(ies)?

Will Kathy and Julie be sent to dreamland every time Jack has to engage in a prolonged struggle with his legacy, or will Jack finally award either or both of them to his choice of breeder stock as a consolation prize? Perhaps Jack will start breeding them both to start his own dynasty?

Will Jack confront multiple dark forces concurrently? Will there ever be a dark force succubus? Will Jack ever play off multiple dark force elements against each other to rescue the world?

I will anxiously await the next chapter and hope there are multiple new rescues and seductions of fair and not so fair maidens around the world.

Awesome storyline. Your story keeps building and building becoming more complex and I am loving every word of it. This latest chapter was less about eroticism and more about plot lines leading me to think that you are purposely taking me (the reader) someplace. Where is it you are going? I can't wait for this story to continue.

I loved this -- you've done superbly.

That said, it's been long enough - we need the next installment! I must know how he goes about actually fighting this evil guy, not to mention the "real danger" he's going to face.

Please please keep it up and get the next chapter out as soon as you possibly can.

Good ideas.

Good English.

I'm looking forward to the rest.

Thanks for the stories and hope you get better soon!

Where is the rest of it? Want a lot more, please.

p.s. You write like it is for a newspaper. It is all bulletized into bite sized pieces. Try relaxing and let it flow more from paragraph to paragraph. It doesn't have to be quite so distinct between each of the paragraphs.

I just read your bio, hope all is well, maybe didn't even have to have surgery. Hope to see the next chapters!

A little tittilation and a viable story line, I enjoy this more then most of the stories which tend to be short on plot and shallow in te sexual line.

Love the story so far. Can't wait to get more.

HURRY

If only all fantasy novels were this interesting. Then again, if it were i would be holed inside my bed room with a box of tissues for the rest of my life T.T

When is the next one?? I loved this

I like the wayyou are buiding the story up . Thank you great start to this story.

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site! Well Done! I am interested in reading more.

great story. Hope that you add chapters and do not leave us hanging.

Thank you for your incite into the mind of a nice, young military man. Being military myself, I can relate to the character and feel his desire for both wanting to help others as well as slake his thirst for love and lust. Please continue. Thank you again.

Really enjoying this series!

You have found a very Odd way to bring your story's together. You Have Brought Many strings together in a story, twisting them form a very good story. write and Post More Please.

Wonderful story, please keep it coming

The Artifact needs more stories! When? Let me know when you write more to the series!!

Please write more about this story! I loved every chapter of it and would love to read more about it! And I want to know how it goes on and what awaits the hero of teh story and what new power he will gain. Dont let us wait to long for more please

This is what pro writing is all about!!! I'm excited for the series, Charlie mike!!

This is the best story I've read on this site. The sex is steamy, and the plot keeps me reading. I can't wait for the next chapter!

great story cant wait for more

So when are you going to Complete the story.

he needs to take the Bad Guy down and get to the Ranch.

Really enjoying your story!! Hoping you will find the time to finish it soon. Keep up the great work!

hey "doc" u really gotta finish this saga i think it is a great read

can't wait to read more, this is a really excellent story.

great story hope you write more soon

Great story! Love the balance between the sex and the actual story! Please post up more, it would be a shame if you didn't!

Are you going to complete this story or have you ran out of ideas for it?

Write more now

HOPE YOU CARRY IT ON...IT IS A GREAT STORY THAT COULD BE AND SHOULD BE CONTINUED!

I love your stories please you have to make more #1 story on this website!!!!!!!!

Hey please continue

Whenever I visit Literotica, "The Artifact" is one of the stories I check on. I found it in June of 2010, and have been hoping that you would let us enjoy the ending or the continuing saga, whichever the case would be. Hoping to hear from you soon.

So when are you gonna finish this?

this story is awesome and i'm sure i'm not alone when i say we want you to keep writing

When I read erotica this is what i crave; a story that goes with the sex; characters in which i can personally feel their desire. Well done sir, well done. I read every word and I didn't skip to the "good parts". And you've even managed to slip ethics into the piece. Please continue. Don't waste your gift.

So excited for this story...if this was a book I would buy it. Please don't tease us anymore and continue this story.

Just checking in to see if your still writing. I'm eager for more!

Why did you not finish this series. It is/was one of the best and you just left it hanging.

Let me add my comments to the others - keep writing this interesting, well-thought-out story!

How can you leave us poor readers without your gift?! You withhold unfairly, sir! Please know you have a grateful, appreciative audience that value, nay, treasure your finesse with language. Deprive us NO MORE!

I've been reading stories on this site for five or six years and I have never been interested in either. It goes without saying that this is well done.

I stumbled upon this story by accident and was captivated by the title. I could see this becoming a book at some point. I do encourage you to continue writing this story as it is fantastic. I, as others have noticed its been a while since writing. I do hope all is well. Thank you for your time in writing.

Sincerely,

D.

I've never left a comment before. I've been reading these stories on this site for over seven years now. I've never been more wrapped up and wound up by a story before. Very well done. I hope a novella is coming next. This is fantastic stuff.

loved the stories but we need the rest please!

Hey Doc, just wanted to let you know that there is still demand for more stories! Although, just reading the comments would have told you that. :)

Excellent work! But like everyone else I want the rest of the story! Lol!

Hi Doc,

It would be nice if you could have an ending with your stories, instead of leaving us wondering what will take place in the next chapter or when it will arrive.

Very enjoyable reading with good story line.

Do you right anywhere else or do you go by any other name?

I LIKE THE WAY THAT YOU PUT THREE PARTS OF YOUR STORIES TOGETHER. MY REAL PROBLEM IS WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY, WHY LEAVE US WAITING TWO YEARS FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OR ENDING OF THE STORY. THANKS BUT I NEED MORE

Hey Doc;

Where is the rest of the story "The Artifact"? An Outcry for it's continuation.

Ok, I'm hooked, love the story. A few grammar/typos here and there but great story. If you want a proof reader on it drop me a line I'd gladly help out. Just keep the ball rolling I think you've got something good going here.

hello doc

obviously you can tell by that greeting i`m english.

i really love your stories,

but i feel the same as everyone else .

please plesae please

more stories

or end this one

dont keep us waiting please.

One of the better pieces I've read here.

Even with a deus ex machina to advance the plot, you're still going to some effort to have a story, with characters, who have motivations. Bravo.

Please write more but only as quickly as you can still maintain this quality. :)

Hi Doc, thank you for a brilliant story. I know it takes time and a lot of thought to come up with a story like this and can't wait for the next part. Meanwhile I hope you get lots of positive feedback to keep on encouraging you to write quick.

More layers added. The story line advances and grows deeper.

Well done.

With all the years of just reading, yours is the FIRST that I have responded to.

Keep it up and find an end for all to enjoy, so all CAN enjoy.

It has been 3 years now and not another section to the story. when are you going to finish it?

Best story on the site, just wish you would finish it.....

Each chapter gets better... Can't wait for the next one!

I look forward to the next chapter. This is a very nice story!

You've read it more often, but Doc, you are a pen artist. where is the sequel?

Please continue with the chapters - one of the best and most original stories I've read here

its a very good story that has plot and sex. it is on my top 3 with genie cronicles i like it and keep it mup dont quit on us

I just found this and while the first part didn't grab me, that later chapters were fun. I really wish there was a part 4

very good read - please don't make us wait much longer for the next part...