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Great story!
Very enjoyable story woven around what could have given contentious new meaning. Some rough patches for the characters but they worked their way through the problems with excellent results.
loved all three stories
Wish it would continue, but all good things must end.
V-Good
Excelent 3 stories, I agree with Anonymous in USA that all good things must end, thank you .
I loved it!!!
I loved this story, and I really wish it didn't have to come to an end! You are a very talented writer so keep the stories coming!
HUMM, DIED WITH A WHIMPER
One of the first things I looked for on Literotica was a new installment to this story and the other two tied into it. It was interesting and I understand all things need to end but this last installment seemed weak to me. All in all, good story line. It was almost like you just decided to end it however rather than take it to a more normal conclusion. I am one of those persons that like to see "loose ends" tied up nicely. I do, however commend you on the entire series and on your writing skills. Continue please.
Thanks for all your effort and Excellent results!
I copied several earlier comments just to be able to 2nd their comments.
Wonderful Writing... yes it appears you struggled with one chapter but in the end you built a bridge and carried on.
Thanks Again.
I loved it!!!
I loved this story, and I really wish it didn't have to come to an end! You are a very talented writer so keep the stories coming![read more]
V-Good
Excelent 3 stories, I agree with Anonymous in USA that all good things must end, thank you .[read more]
loved all three stories
Wish it would continue, but all good things must end.[read more]
Great story!
Very enjoyable story woven around what could have given contentious new meaning. Some rough patches for the characters but they worked their way through the problems with excellent results.[read more]
Great Series
I loved the entire series. It seemed to come to an abrupt end, but hopefully it will be updated later. Great writing, keep up the good work.
Liked the story
Enjoyed reading your story, it was a bit slow moving but overall enjoyable.
Plodding.
A catalogue of non-events
This one was a bit of a disappointment
Save yourself a modicum of boredom and skip up to CH 11.
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