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Okay story
But I like my protagonists to have a little more smarts than a squirrel. Jake was just a big, dumb construction worker that let a woman crap all over him numerous times until he saw the light. What's to like about that?
Get real
"It wasn't a peck on the cheek but a full fledged, stick your tongue down the throat kiss."
I have an ex-wife because I happened to catch my wife in a make-out session with an old high school boyfriend. He was the one who popped her cherry and I never really believe she got over him. When I caught them, they were having the same sort of kiss, with one tit hanging out and his hand down her pants.
It seems they must have been reliving days gone by because I found them parked out behind the school where kids went on the weekends and cherries were popped left and right, sometimes with an audience, such as my ex-wife. His car window was down and before either one knew I was there, I grabbed her left wrist where her hand was wrapped around his neck and pulled her half way out. It gave me a good purchase on her hand and I was able to tug the ring off her finger.
She tried to call me, stop by, send notes and even send friends but I refused to have anything to do with her. The best thing that ever happened was when I had done a little recon and when she was at her boyfriends house (Oh, I'm suuuure it was platonic) I had her served with divorce papers. She tried to fight but neither of us had any money and she ended up signing and we went out separate way.
I heard through the grapevine she married the ex I caught her with. It lasted until she ended up with Herpes and Chlamydia and then married again, but that time to an abuser who beat the hell out of her. I can't abide a beater of women so without anyone knowing about it, I drove back and waited for my chance. It came when he was coming out before daylight to start his truck to warm up before leaving for work. When he stepped out of that truck, he ran right into my fist. When I left him laying there he was in no shape to beat anyone again.
She divorced that guy while he was in the hospital. I hoped he ended up with her fucking crotch critters while they were together. Once Saturday afternoon, she surprised the hell out of me by showing up at my house. Surprising because I didn't think anyone knew where I lived and it was 600 miles away from where we had lived. She apologized for everything and said she hadn't fucked her ex at that point where I found them, but she had planned to and had no explanation as to why. She went on to tell me how bad her life had been since I divorced her and was there anyway I could see us getting back together.
The car pulling up put an end to our conversation and she waited for me to talk to them so we could continue with our talk. Instead, when the woman walked up on the porch, I had the opportunity to introduced my ex-wife to my present wife! My ex hadn't known I had remarried. Priceless!
Damn
She didn't have sex but she was betraying her fiancée by fooling around with her asshole boyfriend. Now she left the area, alone. Fuck her.
Kelly
was the only nice guy in this sad story
Still a good read
This is second time I've read the tale. Really enjoy your stories and they are good reads. Do you publish?
coneger2
Great Story
This is another great story, sad in some ways of course, but still a great story. There are lines that can't be crossed in any relationship. The line is drawn in one place while casually dating, redrawn in another place when agreeing to be exclusive, then moved to another place when they become engaged. The line moves again when finally married, but won't move far from where it was during the engagement period.
There's never any argument about where the line is drawn until someone decides to get as close to it as possible. And even though there may not be a concensous about where that line is actually drawn - everyone seems to know when they've crossed it. So glad Jake didn't compromise his values, it saved him a lot of heartache later on.
Thanks for the story, keep writing.
Good reading
But I don't get it.
What?
Is wrong with you thinking a guy would have a slut cheat on him twice and still all hung up on her. If that is how your brain works she a shrink.
Second time through
A great beginning. Five stars.
by Anonymous
08/09/16
what do you mean diffrent lines ??? if she agrees to be exclusive theres is only one line do not cheat its as simple as that what kind off bullshit are you on about?
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