All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 12'

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kitten0829kitten0829over 14 years ago
yay

i'm glad lindsey finally had the courage to kill raife

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Thanks for posting

in the holiday. It was great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
There for a minute ..

I actually thought he wasnt going to be able to kill Raiffe .. Im glad he finally did now maybe he can come to terms with his feelings for A :) I absolutely adore these brothers lol .. Keep up the good work and keep em coming

lildragonlildragonover 14 years ago
Oh No!

Don't you dare leave us like that. There has to be one more chapter. Please give us more.

starry_nightstarry_nightover 14 years ago
Yay!

It's over. Now they can start loving each other, and Lindsay can stop drinking tequila. It was great to see the brothers working together kicking some demon butt. Thanks for taking the time to write! Happy holidays!

NayeliNayeliover 14 years ago
Kept me on my toes

Great ending; like other readers, I was afraid he wouldn't be able to kill Raife; I was kind of hoping for some sort of revival of Rachel, just to see who he'd choose :)

There's more, right? We still need to see how Lindsay & Alauria figure out their relationship. And when are you planning on bringing back Nadia (you are going to do that, right?)

I love this series and I hope you'll find inspiration to write a story for each of the brothers.

NayeliNayeliover 14 years ago
Kept me on my toes

Great ending; like other readers, I was afraid he wouldn't be able to kill Raife; I was kind of hoping for some sort of revival of Rachel, just to see who he'd choose :)

There's more, right? We still need to see how Lindsay & Alauria figure out their relationship. And when are you planning on bringing back Nadia (you are going to do that, right?)

I love this series and I hope you'll find inspiration to write a story for each of the brothers.

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
Awesome!!!!!

That was a great fight scene. I am glad that you put so much detail in your stories.

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