All Comments on 'Under The Mistletoe'

by randyslocum

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buzzed_mbabuzzed_mbaover 14 years ago
awesome!!!

The story was pretty good but you messed up with a few punctuation marks in the first few para...but it's okay! overoll....i really liked it...thanks for the read!!!

RaeandLynnRaeandLynnover 14 years ago
Loved it

Loved it.....interracial sex is the best kind.....especially white male/black female......write some more or we can trade...mine are all true stories.....

lust_4_ulust_4_uover 14 years ago
great beginning

I like how you have started the story off - a real life scenario and how while under normal day to day circumstances things may have been quite different - you have allowed the characters to go with the flow so to speak and play out some fantasies. I hope you will continue this story of firsts, interracial and taboos that you opened with!

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