by naykedanonymous
wow please you have to do a follow up this story turned me on so much just wow keep up the good work
... I honestly don't know what else to say. That was unbelievably hot. Not only that, it was quite well-written. Damn glad I came across this one :)
Hot, believable, compelling. I'd have read even if it hadn't been erotica. It's rare to find a story written so well, and the fact that you can do the sexy side too is just fantastic. I'm off to read everything else you've ever written, and look out for future stories.
Really awesome storytelling. I hope this tale continues.
If your first series is this good, I can't wait to see your second.
Well I never went thru the Shy Person Stage, Butt everything else this girl experienced I experienced myself. I never tried 2 put it into words, Butt this author has done just a marvelous job of it. This is my kind of story. Thank U so much.
Love & Kisses,
Betty.teaserat gmaildotc.
Be Naughty
Wow - absolutely brilliant story!! The swimsuit stuff was fantastic!!
You are such a fantastic writer and this series is awesome. The character is rich and the plot is developing slowly drawing the reader in deeper and deeper. You need to write more stories and post them here. You have such a talent!
Hooked6
You did enjoy yourself at the party, I say lets get the batgirl out of the shadows.
You know the power you possess, and its not the biggest secret.
I love your self discovery, the swimming pool guy with the goggles well its a start.
Oh Good Story overall. !
Liking this start to your series, hope it develops as well as this start seems to suggest.
Your "A Formerly Shy Person Series" is one of my fave stories posted on Literotica, I do so hope you post more of Susan's exploits and embarrassments.