All Comments on 'A Formerly Shy Person'

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soul_surfer_420soul_surfer_420over 14 years ago
HOT AS HELL

wow please you have to do a follow up this story turned me on so much just wow keep up the good work

PoutineFanPoutineFanover 14 years ago
Holy...

... I honestly don't know what else to say. That was unbelievably hot. Not only that, it was quite well-written. Damn glad I came across this one :)

BlueFinchBlueFinchover 14 years ago
Brilliant!

Hot, believable, compelling. I'd have read even if it hadn't been erotica. It's rare to find a story written so well, and the fact that you can do the sexy side too is just fantastic. I'm off to read everything else you've ever written, and look out for future stories.

harvharvover 14 years ago
loved it

WOW, that was hot. I hope that her escapades continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wickedly hot stuff!

Really awesome storytelling. I hope this tale continues.

Billr26Billr26over 14 years ago
Great First Story

I loved it and I hope you continue the tale!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Smoking...

Absolutely fucking mot as hell!!!! Please, more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Start, Keep Going!

If your first series is this good, I can't wait to see your second.

Betty18Betty18about 14 years ago
Shy Person

Well I never went thru the Shy Person Stage, Butt everything else this girl experienced I experienced myself. I never tried 2 put it into words, Butt this author has done just a marvelous job of it. This is my kind of story. Thank U so much.

Love & Kisses,

Betty.teaserat gmaildotc.

Be Naughty

cnp_dudleycnp_dudleyalmost 14 years ago
So Sweet

Wow - absolutely brilliant story!! The swimsuit stuff was fantastic!!

abc101abc101almost 13 years ago
great story

this was a great story. i really enjoyed it. please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
THIS STORY ROCKS!!

You are such a fantastic writer and this series is awesome. The character is rich and the plot is developing slowly drawing the reader in deeper and deeper. You need to write more stories and post them here. You have such a talent!

Hooked6

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
"They just a wana".

You did enjoy yourself at the party, I say lets get the batgirl out of the shadows.

You know the power you possess, and its not the biggest secret.

I love your self discovery, the swimming pool guy with the goggles well its a start.

Oh Good Story overall. !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good start

Liking this start to your series, hope it develops as well as this start seems to suggest.

BadDaddy59BadDaddy59over 7 years ago
Worth the read

Your "A Formerly Shy Person Series" is one of my fave stories posted on Literotica, I do so hope you post more of Susan's exploits and embarrassments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just discovered this series, GREAT writing, erotic, not smutty.

Avery69Avery697 months ago

Fuck, I wish I was her. Amazing story.

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