All Comments on 'My Very First Pussy'

You need to edit it. A good story premise was hampered by bad grammar and spelling. Keep at it though, it showed some promise!

Believe me, Duke, nobody would steal your story. Are you old enough to post on Literotica? From your prose, I would guess that you're not more than 15.

Anonymous, your poorly thought out comments might carry a little weight if you had actually pointed out even one specific. As it is I must assume that you are simply a youngster that is overcome with jealousy.

I barely made it through the first two paragraphs because of grammatical errors, so did not bother reading the rest. Even your disclaimer has an error. Please get an editor.

How did he see unpantied lips when she was driving yet she was still wearing her two piece swimming suit?