A great debut story, Pearl. That female step mother just sounds gorgeous. More, please.
Great story, absolutely loved it. Nice pace, and an easy read.
That was so hot!
Are you kidding me??? If he were a communist he would be a better man? British socialist propaganda should be left on blogs…..
Couldnt fault it at all, I cant wait to read more :-)
Great first story! The ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise I loved it. Is there more to follow?
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A great debut story, Pearl. That female step mother just sounds gorgeous. More, please.
Loved it.
Great story, absolutely loved it. Nice pace, and an easy read.
Great story
That was so hot!
Snorting Capitalist???
Are you kidding me??? If he were a communist he would be a better man? British socialist propaganda should be left on blogs…..
Great Story
Couldnt fault it at all, I cant wait to read more :-)
Very nice!
Great first story! The ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise I loved it. Is there more to follow?
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